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SlaYer
Jul 19, 2001, 05:07 AM
Trough the never.



Part 1 - Secrets revealed.





I guess you just dont know what you have untill it is gone, do you?

Its been three years now after the loss of my wife, and not a moment goes by that i dont think of her. God i loved her so much... I lighted a cigaret, i know it was bad for my healt, but who care about what happened to me anyway. My whole life ended that day, three years ago.

The phone rang, should i let it ring and pretend i wasnt home?..

Maybe its Paolo, i'd better answer. I picked up the phone and heard a nervous voice on the other end of the line.

"Doctor you'd better come here right away, i believe we may have found something".

I threw to horn back on the phone and rushed into my car.

My cigaret hanging in the corner of my mouth fell down and made a small burningmark in my jeans. I cursed and opened my window to throw the cigaret out.

My name.. my name is Donald Harris. Im an archeologist here on Carrotus and back home on Diamondus. People call me one of the planets best archeologists.

I feel honored carrying this name but it takes allot of responsebility.

The press is almost always on my heels, and if i have failed, it'll be in all off the papers before i even realise i have failed. It's a hard job, but its all i have left in the world.

I arrived at the digging spot and Paolo ran to car, he seemed very anxious to show me what he and the group had digged up. "Come doctor, come on ill show you". He said as he held the door of my car open. "Its amazing its...."

I saw it myself, a beautyfull golden relic, god knows how old it was.

"Well doc, what do you think of it?" He said crossing his arms and standing their as proud as a rabbit can be. "Its amazing paolo, we may have found the key to the question... is there more life in this universe.." A glowing came from the golden relic and Donald came closer to examine it.

Female figured, animal figures and writings where all over the relic, Donald was ofcourse most interested in the writings. One of the diggers came closer and wanted to lay his hand on the relic.

"No!" Donald shouted. "Noone can touch this, it may keep powers that are yet uknown to us".

The digger turned around and walked back to the group. "You may all get some rest now, go, go". The diggers got in their tents and after a little while they all where fast asleep.

"They must be exhausted". Donald said. "They have done very much work sir". Paolo said.

Donald blew some sand of the relic and bared some new signs.

"This will take me a while to translate Paolo, why dont you get some rest to?"

"Thank you sir, that will do me good". Paolo turned around and headed for his tent.

"And Paolo".

"Yes sir?"

"You can call me Donald". He said with a smile on his face.

"Sleep well Donald, and good luck with translating".

Donald worked for hours and hours, but tiredness struck him and he fell asleep in the warm desertsand. Late at night he heard a rumbling and opened his eyes, he stood up and saw some footprints in the sand, they started at the relic and Donald followed them, wondering where they would lead him. They took him to a mountian, and there to footsteps mysteriously stopped in front of a bush. Donald pushed the leaves away and entered the tunnel that lay behind them.

It was very dark in there, Donald could feel little, slimy things crawling up against his leg.

Then he bumped into something, a door, his hand reached out in the dark and found a doorknob.

The door slid open and Donald walked into a room, light came from candles that where placed in a wall. "Anybody home?"

Donald's question was answered soon. A huge hidious looking creature stood on the other side of the room. "Hello Donald." It said with a deep and Dark voice.

"He.. Hey" Donald stutterd. "Who .. what ar..."

"Dont worry Donald your amongst friends, im just as curious about you as you are about me, have a seat". Donald didnt want to miss this opurtunity, he was the first rabbit to make contact with aliens, he walked to the seat and sat down.

"I've been studying this planet for a long time, still, there are things i dont understand".

"We'll, i guess we are a difficult race then".

"Yes.. you sure are, on one side you are cute and harmless, if aliens from out of space would come here to destroy your planet.. there would be nothing you could do to stop them".

Donald got more scared and nervous after these few words of the alien.

"Well we cou..". Donald tryed.

"Dont worry Donald, i told you, you were amongst friend, we wouldnt try anything funny,

now on the other hand.. there are creatures of the night, they form a treat to us Donald.. they are stronger.. some of them even more intelligent then us, we really love this planet Donald".

"I dont understand your intentions."

"We dont ask you to understand us Donald.. we want you to help us.. and you cant say no Donald".

"I thought i was amongst friends". Donald stutterd.

"You are Donald.. but you have to be kind to us Donald.. We can help you Donald, we can let you surive, give you power, knowledge.. would you like that Donald?"

Donald didnt answer all he wanted was to get out of there.

"Come out of the dark Jar'Gad". A black rabbit with two red streaks over his sheeks stepped out of the dark and bared his sharp canine fangs.

"Oh my god". Donald fell from his chair. "Get away from me". He shouted when the Black rabbit came close, the rabbit sank his big canine teeth deep in Donald's flesh and Donald's horrible scream was heard trough the desert..



Paolo woke up and ran to the relic. "Donald. Where are you Donald." Paolo shouted.

He noticed the footprints in the sand and followed them running, fearing for what had happened to Donald. He stood in front of the mountian and found the same entrance Donald had gone trough. When he had climbed down the stairs the door was already open and Paolo saw Donald's lifeless body laying on the floor.

"Nooooo." Paolo screamed and he ran over the check Donald's pulse.

"Donald, you cant die, we found the relic".

"Hello Paolo". Paolo turned around and saw the alien, tears of fear and sadness ran down Paolo's cheek. "You killed Donald.. you monster, why have you done this".

"That relic is a spydevice, for the people on my planet, Paolo.. And i want it back.. to give them the information it has gathered over the last 1000 years on this planet.. Carrotus will be ours, and Paolo, we want Donald to bring it back to us.. he isnt really dead you know".

Paolo turned around and looked at the lifeless body of Donald.

"But..but..." Before Paolo could finish his sentence Donalds hand grabbed him by the neck and with one firm movement he ripped Paolo's head off.



The door shut and a desert wind whiped the footprints that leaded to the secret hide-out away...

The relic got covered by desertsand.. not to be found again..for a long time.







To be continued.

Tha Psycho
Jul 19, 2001, 07:30 AM
Nice one to bring up a story 'bout new species slay



(Profiles needed or jsut without profs)

Violet CLM
Jul 19, 2001, 12:39 PM
Good thing I didn't read this at night. I dislike nightmares.

Ducky
Jul 20, 2001, 05:28 AM
Indeed, me too. But rather nice, however, the way you write Slayie, is so interesting.

Groovy. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

`Ducky

SlaYer
Jul 20, 2001, 06:00 AM
Without profiles. i never use them anyway.

I already have a part for Jelze and you though. And thank you Duck, i take that as a compliment http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

_________________

Here to serve he who brings the light,

and born out of she who brings darkness..



he is the Slayer,



From the book of time.

GuMmYBeAr!
Jul 20, 2001, 05:25 PM
yay slayie! tehe.. ouu nice story. its 9:27.. i wonder.. if im goin 2 have nightmarez after tis. tehe i dun fink so... anyways..i like nightmares. sumtimes i can control em and it turns all groovy like.. aliens dancin macarena n... i better shut up now. stop starin at me that way. .. can i join? http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_wink.gif

baddie/goodie?

SlaYer
Jul 25, 2001, 02:44 PM
Part 2 –Have faith





Screaming rabbits in a crowded hall.

“SIT DOWN AND SHUT THE HECK UP”. Carrotus prison, the worst place a rabbit could end up in this galaxy. Twenty tables stood in the hall, place for twenty man on each table. Those who said one more word got instantly fried with an electric rod under high voltage. To the left there was a smaller hall. With heavily secured prisons.

In one of them a young man sat. No bars, no running water..no toilet.

Everything there was in this room where him and his bed.

A guard knocked on the door. The young man grabbed the boots next to his bed and put them on. The guard pushed on a button and the boots got magnitieced securly to the floor. The young rabbit couldnt move an inch.

Guard: “Look what we have here, your last meal hahaha. Tommorow you’ll be the meal of the dogs you will be fed to alive mister Tomb Raider haha, how do you feel now”.

The young man didnt say a word and looked at the food.

Guard: “Oh you want your food dont you? Here, take a bite”.

The guard put his dirty fingers in the mans carrotstew and threw it in his face, then he spit at him. “Ill be the last person you’ll ever see alive, enjoy the moment”. The guard said laughing. The man turned red with anger. “You will pay for this. I swear, you will pay for this”. The guard came closer. “What did you see swine? I will pay for this?”

The guard hit the man over the head. He managed to keep himself up and spitted in the guards face. When the guard wanted to hit his ribs the man jump out of his shoes and his foot found the way to the guards troath. The guard gasped for breath and the man broke his neck. “You shouldnt have threated me that way”.

He finished his meal and changed clothes with the guard.

“Thanks, your my ticket to freedom pal.”

He whistled, walked out of the jail and shut the door, then he walked down the hall and hit the alarm, all guards moved to the hall where everyone was eating.

“This is to easy.”

JelZe GoldRabbit
Jul 25, 2001, 03:01 PM
Who is that guy??

SlaYer
Jul 25, 2001, 03:08 PM
time will tell us http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif



And i can add you tyffie, but no others.

i cant take anymore joiners.



so its Me, Jelze, Psycho and Tyff.



Hope y'all like it so far.







_________________

Here to serve he who brings the light,

and born out of she who brings darkness..



he is the Slayer,



From the book of time.

Tha Psycho
Jul 26, 2001, 01:23 PM
I hope time will even tell us more http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif



Prison sure isn't hat it used to bem LSay http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif



Good story, man

Foxxy Chica
Aug 2, 2001, 08:46 AM
No fair!!!

Avalanche [Rage of Evil]
Aug 2, 2001, 08:53 AM
A shame, i wanted to be in here too...

SlaYer
Aug 2, 2001, 02:01 PM
hmm, so its like u wont read it if u cant be in it?WEAK

Ducky
Aug 2, 2001, 06:05 PM
Sigh. It would of been nice.

Stop being cranky Slay. No one said that :P

I'LL read it. http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_mad.gif

`Ducky

GuMmYBeAr!
Aug 2, 2001, 07:53 PM
yay slay.. continueeeeeee

Avalanche [Rage of Evil]
Aug 3, 2001, 03:37 AM
Well, that i don't mean



I will still read and reply, but it's always cooler to be in it

Tha Psycho
Aug 3, 2001, 03:43 AM
haha, demonic little brother



i am in it!

SlaYer
Aug 23, 2001, 08:54 AM
Part 3 - What a Psycho





An old mansion, in the middle of nowhere surrounded by a lake, a small bridge leaded to the huge front door of the old but beautyfull mansion.

small angelic faces proudly looked down, they where cut out of white gold.

the front door was carved out of gold.

On the inside in one of the giant rooms there where two rabbits.

One of them was standing in front of a window, holding a glass of wodka in one hand and a big cigar in the other hand, the other one was sitting down in front of the fireplace, also smoking a cigar. His name was john DeMarco, archeologist.

The other one standing in front of the window was Jack Cole, Tombraider and the owner of this mansion. He took a nip of his wodka and his eyes where focused on the small golden icon that was standing on the coffee table in front of John. An old record was playing on the gramaphone, classical.. Chopin, Jack once digged this up in the desert of Grande Carrone. It is said that this record comes from another world, that is why this is one of the most valuable items in this solar system. Jack took a puff of his cigar and took place on the chair that stood at the other end of the coffee table. He still didnt say much and looked into the flames. John finished his Wodka and stood up to get another one.

"40.000 Carrotians you said.. ill give you 35.000." Jack said, he seemed to get a bit angry, gulped his Wodka down and slammed the glass on the table.

"40.000 and no less, i already took 2.500 off of the prize." Then he looked at Jack and he saw his angry face, that showed him he wasnt to pleased with this.

"Come on Jack, think about the old days, We have been bussiness partners for so long, 40.000 for such a beautyfull icon, its almost for free."

Jack thought back about the old days, him, John and his friend Louie who was now in Carrotus prison. Back on Diamondus during the great diamondian raid. Where only the strongest surrvived.

"Louie would have killed you if you offered him the icon for a prize higher then 20.000." Jack said while sinking back in his seat. "By the way, pour me another Wodka to".

"But the fact is.. Your not Brandon, he is in Carrotian prison now, and he isnt about to get out of there soon, and yes he would have killed me, people dont call him the Slayer for no reason." John grinned while thinking of the Slayer of the Diamondian raid.

"You know what people used to call me John?" Jack said while John stretched out to hand the wodka over to him. "They called me Psycho."

With one fast single move Jack grabbed his arm and pulled at it.

John lost his balance and fell to the ground, he left out a few screams.

"You can scream as loud as you want John, there is noone around here.. Thats why me and Brandon, or Slayer as you call him have chosen to live here".

Psycho said with hate in his voice.

"Oh my god.. You and him are a team?"

"Yes, we are, a team of cold blooded Tomb raiders" Jack broke his arm and walked to a big wooden cabin, he unlocked it and took an ancient six-shooter out. "That record isnt the only thing we found thats not from this world."

He blew the dust of his old six shooter and loaded it with some bullets that he had hidden in a secret compartment of the gun cabinet.

"Listen to this sound John." Jack said while John was laying on the floor, in tears of pain over his broken arm, when he saw the gun his stare went blank.

"Its a good thing you didnt pass out, i love to see the terror in people's eyes.

'bang', 'bang'. Two shots trough John troath and he fell back. laying there in a puddle of blood just then the doorbell rang.

"Hmmm, who could that be, whoever he is, he's spoiling all the fun."

Jack cleaned the bloodstains of his clothes with his hands and walked to the front door. He opened with a big, friendly smile and saw his friend Louie.

"Yeah?". The person that stood in front of the door rubbed trough his eyes and the color changed from blue to orange.

"Louie, oh my god i almost didnt recognize you."

Tha Psycho
Aug 23, 2001, 11:21 AM
Splendid

Ducky
Aug 23, 2001, 01:42 PM
Spookay http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

`Ducky

Coppertop
Aug 23, 2001, 02:33 PM
*sobs*



No more joiners? Whaah!



Oh well. Continue, is ruxor!

Kaz
Aug 23, 2001, 06:36 PM
Somewhat demonic... but... uhh... end post!