NaT's Drawings

[NaT]

Well here are some Men look at them, and rate them...(how I draw) :-)
http://img169.echo.cx/img169/4995/strongman1en.png (http://www.imageshack.us) http://img169.echo.cx/img169/4488/mannn0il.png (http://www.imageshack.us) http://img169.echo.cx/img169/9674/longhairman8wv.png (http://www.imageshack.us) http://img37.echo.cx/img37/228/hairman9uu.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Odin]

Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.

[Baggers]

1) Very nice
3) Very nice
4&2) pretty good but a bit same-y

[NaT]

Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.

And where is this DeviantArt???

[Baggers]

Nat: Dude google doesnt hurt !

Odin: why the problwm with nat posting his work here ?..i dont get it...or is there soemthing in the rules i havnt read?

[NaT]

What's with this Google??

[Baggers]

hehe cheeky begger -
http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=DeviantArt&sourceid=mozilla-search&start=0&start=0&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&client=firefox-a&rls=org.mozilla:en-GB:official

[NaT]

look at my cartoon..on wich im working now...
http://img141.echo.cx/img141/5037/max22ul.png (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img141.echo.cx/img141/6496/thewar1fl.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[n00b]

Here's a much better idea:

1. Get some cheap hosting.

2. Put your drawings up there.

3. Post a link to your site in your sig.

Or, you could just join DeviantArt. There's a Jazz Jackrabbit club there.
Yes much better, defeat the whole purpose of having an art forum.

[Baggers]

Yes much better, defeat the whole purpose of having an art forum.
Yeah I dont get what he's done wrong ?

@Nat: Nice work, whats the guy in the first pic wearing on his head ?

[NaT]

It was wery hard to draw it but I did it!!! (it's a hat)...... he's a leutenant....

[Odin]

look at my cartoon..on wich im working now...
http://img141.echo.cx/img141/5037/max22ul.png (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img141.echo.cx/img141/6496/thewar1fl.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Not bad. Your style reminds me of Shmorky, but with thinner lines.

Just so you know, if you have images larger than 640x480, link them.

[Baggers]

Is there a size rule...sorry i didnt know

[Blade Nightflame]

Darn, I love the style, so simple, yes, so funky. Good job there.

[Blackraptor]

You have an interesting drawing style, and the pictures look cool so keep drawing more!

[NaT]

Thanks........ i will...

[LittleFreak]

Quiet cool drawing style. :)

However, I think you should try out drawing something different than soldiers </s>with ugly noses ;D</s>

[n00b]

He does, didin't you see the first 4? 3 of those dudes look like hippies man.

[Coppertop]

I like your style, Nat. Looks good.

[NaT]

Fast and Easy! thats how I call my style!

[NaT]

Here........Piccolo......heh :lol:
http://img300.echo.cx/img300/9940/piccollo5vv.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[MoonBlazE]

I think the biggest problem with your dwarings is that they all look the same. After seeing your first few ones there wasn't anything new or unexpected to see. You should really try putting some more powerful expressions into your characters.

[LittleFreak]

That's what I wanted to say, I just expressed it the wrong way.

I hate (HATE) my art teacher, but she said one thing that is actually true: An artist who always draws the same isn't an artist.

I still hate her, but that one sentence is true.

No offense to you of course. ;)

[Sun Fun Dude]

Yeah they almost all have the same hair, nose, head shape and expression, I mean the style's nice but you've got to work some more on it.

[Fawriel]

Another thing you need to work on is anatomy.
I don't mean correct proportions, but their limbs and such <i>should</i> all be the same length and everything ( note how that is not the case with the.. boxer..? in the first post ).
Also, your characters need some better proportions to be more flexible. You almost always draw them with their hands down, and I can't really imagine them being in a different position, like cheering, hands pointing up.
Also, look at the soldier with the shotgun. Thanks to his lack of fingers, he isn't actually holding the gun, he's kind of balancing it on his hand, and the right hand ( from his view ) seems to either be one half too short or to bend wrong.
A different, cartoony style is nice and all, but it has to actually <i>work</i>, too.

..also, I wonder whether you ever drew a woman.

[NaT]

Flexible? Hands Up! hehe! woman........aaaa..... next time! ok?
http://img267.echo.cx/img267/1442/criminal6bo.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[LittleFreak]

@ Fawriel: I don't really see the need for the proportions to be 100% right, after all it's a comic style so that isn't needed imo.

[HEART OF IRON]

here if you don't know how to draw woman..i can teach you...
http://img35.echo.cx/img35/7481/woman0ty.png (http://www.imageshack.us) just draw a man with long hair ... :lol: :lol:

[Fawriel]

@ Fawriel: I don't really see the need for the proportions to be 100% right, after all it's a comic style so that isn't needed imo.
adsadsada
You didn't listen.
I never said the proportions had to be correct, but there have to be SOME. I mean, his characters practically don't even have fingers!

[White Rabbit]

<s>Jedis don't need clumsy, mechanical fingers: the Force is universal.</s>

[LittleFreak]

just draw a man with long hair ...

Does that mean I'm a woman just because I'm having long hair? >O

The picture is wicked though. =P

[Sun Fun Dude]

Flexible? Hands Up! hehe! woman........aaaa..... next time! ok?

Well, looks ok but the two guys still look like exactly the same person, you need to make them more distinctive. Another thing is angles, you seem to always draw you characters from the same view, maybe you could spice that up a bit. And yeah also maybe do some members of the opposite sex...

[NinJazz]

Well, looks ok but the two guys still look like exactly the same person, you need to make them more distinctive. Another thing is angles, you seem to always draw you characters from the same view, maybe you could spice that up a bit. And yeah also maybe do some members of the opposite sex...

Don't listen to Alex he draws men as birds...

[Sun Fun Dude]

Don't listen to Alex he draws men as birds...

Huh? I'm trying to give art advice and he shouldn't listen because I have a bird character? Where's the logic?

[NaT]

Cool! show me some of you're art (Birds)!

[Sun Fun Dude]

Ok...
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715023/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14244938/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715087/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15442855/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17569277/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/12462183/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17173221/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17102767/
This is all the bird stuff I could find in the gallery, but please don't anyone take the attention of the thread way from NaT, he just wanted to see them ;)

[NaT]

Wow it's really good!!! I see you draw in Flash no? I really liked the comics you made! Not long ago I drew only animals too! but then I desided to draw Humans to put in my cartoons some history like......About Napoleon or something! Well..... once again Congradulations! ;)

[HEART OF IRON]

Ok...
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715023/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/14244938/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15715087/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/15442855/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17569277/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/12462183/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17173221/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17102767/
This is all the bird stuff I could find in the gallery, but please don't anyone take the attention of the thread way from NaT, he just wanted to see them ;)

Well for me your drawings are nice ,,but your animation i don't like..
Here look at my animation (don't look at the story) here http://foxmage.com/The%20Blessing.exe :D

[HEART OF IRON]

Here look one more of my...
http://img295.echo.cx/img295/6874/frizer9sc.th.png (http://img295.echo.cx/my.php?image=frizer9sc.png)

[Sun Fun Dude]

Well for me your drawings are nice ,,but your animation i don't like..
Here look at my animation (don't look at the story) here http://foxmage.com/The%20Blessing.exe :D

Well your animation is OK, don't exatcly see what I could learn from it, if anything I could teach you how to animate some better walking, and why does that bird flap his wings only half way. Sorry for all these comments but you seemed to think that your animation was superior to mine so I thought perhaps I should point out your animation faults too ;) Anyway, let's not get on the subject of how good or bad I am at animating (I don't see how you're any better really ;)) and get back on topic.

[HEART OF IRON]

Well your animation is OK, don't exatcly see what I could learn from it, if anything I could teach you how to animate some better walking, and why does that bird flap his wings only half way. Sorry for all these comments but you seemed to think that your animation was superior to mine so I thought perhaps I should point out your animation faults too ;) Anyway, let's not get on the subject of how good or bad I am at animating (I don't see how you're any better really ;)) and get back on topic.
Do you have some more of your animation?
I want to see if your right... }>

[HEART OF IRON]

Oh yea about the bird...thats cause i don't know how to draw birds!

[Sun Fun Dude]

Do you have some more of your animation?
I want to see if your right... }>

About what? Come on get rid of this high opinion of your animation :lol: I know it's really common for people to see their animation much better (I sure don't, it looks worse everytime I see it) then others see it, but I just don't see how it's that much better than mine.

[HEART OF IRON]

you don't like my animation? i don't like yours !!!

[Sun Fun Dude]

About what? Come on get rid of this high opinion of your animation :lol: I know it's really common for people to see their animation much better (I sure don't, it looks worse everytime I see it) then others see it, but I just don't see how it's that much better than mine.

Anyway surley you've gotta admit this is a good walk cycle: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15442855/ ;)

[HEART OF IRON]

i see you like to make motion tween..thats what i don't like in flash cartoons...so i don't have it.

[HEART OF IRON]

there's just a stupid picture i asked for animation!

[Sun Fun Dude]

there's just a stupid picture i asked for animation!

Did you uh, actually click the picture to get the full view? http://www.deviantart.com/view/15442855/ AND STOP DOUBLE POSTING, sheesh... SEE THAT EDIT BUTTON USE IT! Just getting my point accross. By the way I don't use motion tweens in my cartoons, I never use them, never... Except in that rushed intro movie but what other way is there to make him walk foward (with that great animation) when I was in a rush... And if you didn't see it anyway, where did you see me use motion tweens anyway

When I said animations looking worse I meant MY animations look worse everytime I see them not yours :roll:

[Fawriel]

Click on it, genius.

[HEART OF IRON]

oh here i found .....well.....to tell you the truth .....you should put more frames when he turns his head...and when he walks.....like my animation..

[Sun Fun Dude]

oh here i found .....well.....to tell you the truth .....you should put more frames when he turns his head...and when he walks.....like my animation..

It was the walking animation that's good, not the rest, that was a rushed trashy intro. Oh yeah and can we stop all this :p Your animation is pretty OK anyway, just giving suggestions and critiques as you give yours. And I do see your characters do turn around more smoothly than mine might, I'll take those suggestions and try to make my animation more fluent thanks. Now let's let NaT get back to his drawings :-)

[HEART OF IRON]

ok. :)

[Sun Fun Dude]

Oh so tell me what do you think about my animation (and please don't lie (About the bird i know))

See previous post, I thought it was good, but some of the characters have awkward movments (mainly in walking) and the idea was silly yet fun. I'd like to see more stuff from you, but maybe there should be a thread seperate for your art since there's been like 20 posts on this, let's just let NaT have the thread back :lol:

[HEART OF IRON]

Well atleast here in this forum are people who know how to use flash...I want to ask you a question :how to make loading thingy??

[NaT]

Here are my cartoons! all thanks to Radium!
http://www.foxmage.com/The%20Plank.html
http://www.foxmage.com/DancingMan.swf

[NaT]

I hope you will guess what's this is! (Animated picture)
http://img275.echo.cx/img275/3222/hit5zd.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

Ohh here is the Woman!
http://img263.echo.cx/img263/7586/woman0om.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[Sun Fun Dude]

Heh, I liked the cartoons and that nifty black and white look you gave them, but maybe they could move their arms when they walk (it's always awkward when they just bounce up and down with no other movement unless that's the style). But that woman looks a bit, drag queenish :p Maybe the wemon in your style could have a differently shaped face and such to make them more feminine.

[NaT]

Here the Ugliest one!
http://img271.echo.cx/img271/3395/ouu6os.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[NaT]

the spaniard!
http://img289.echo.cx/img289/9596/spaniard8eo.png (http://www.imageshack.us)

[NinJazz]

hahaha I told you alex draws men as birds :lol: