Doubble Dutch
June 30th, 2006, 05:21 AM
I dunno if this belongs in the War Tavern or not, but I think its Loristic enough to sit here. I think we should all make a story about what would've happened if Lori had really been Spaz's girfriend instead of sister.
Nothing big and oardered like the story by all of us, just a collection of musing paragraphs and such. I want to know what everyone thinks would happen. [Please keep it moderately serious] So in upholding my tradition of being a sick, sick lil girl here is the first chaptergraph:
The lost future
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Eva deftly ducked behind the door. It would be nice to have 4 inches of solid oak between her and the paparatzi, Yeesh, you marry a sodier of fortune that just happened to save your whole planet twice and the press wouldn't leave you alone. She became graduly aware of someone else in the room. She was a young yellow rabbit [younger than Eva anyway, the makeup covered the wrinkles] in fact, it appeared she had stumbled into the girls bedroom, which she was still apparently unpacking into. "You must be with Jazz, I heard his brother is taking the chance of free food and bord while my mother is feeling grateful, so what are you? Cousin?' The yellow rabbit smiled uncertainly "Well, I'm with his brother actually; we just got engaged. My names Lori" She held upa ringed finger. Eva stared "Umm, thats a Crackerjack decoder ring." Lori sniffed "Well, we can't all marry royalty, besides, its the thought that counts."
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Yes, I have too much spare time
Nothing big and oardered like the story by all of us, just a collection of musing paragraphs and such. I want to know what everyone thinks would happen. [Please keep it moderately serious] So in upholding my tradition of being a sick, sick lil girl here is the first chaptergraph:
The lost future
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Eva deftly ducked behind the door. It would be nice to have 4 inches of solid oak between her and the paparatzi, Yeesh, you marry a sodier of fortune that just happened to save your whole planet twice and the press wouldn't leave you alone. She became graduly aware of someone else in the room. She was a young yellow rabbit [younger than Eva anyway, the makeup covered the wrinkles] in fact, it appeared she had stumbled into the girls bedroom, which she was still apparently unpacking into. "You must be with Jazz, I heard his brother is taking the chance of free food and bord while my mother is feeling grateful, so what are you? Cousin?' The yellow rabbit smiled uncertainly "Well, I'm with his brother actually; we just got engaged. My names Lori" She held upa ringed finger. Eva stared "Umm, thats a Crackerjack decoder ring." Lori sniffed "Well, we can't all marry royalty, besides, its the thought that counts."
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Yes, I have too much spare time