JJR doodle

[Klesk]

jjr.. looks like he has a hangover..
next one will be better :p

http://www.ohnitsch.net/jjr.jpg

[CrimiClown]

I like the "I don't give a (-)" look.

[DoubleGJ]

Good, but do try to make his nose smaller and feet bigger. Eyebrows would be nice, too.

[Erik]

Cold blooded killa.

[n0]

Don't listen to 2xGJ, the nose is awsome. It gives him a "Chip and Dale" kind of look. Actually, from about the ...uh... nose down he could be Dale.

But that's a good thing. I'd love to see more from where this came from.

[FreeLance]

The style's cool. Original, but well drawn.
The only thing I would complain about would be that the gun and chest get a little chaotic/hard to see - but it's still not a fault of your drawing, more just the angle of the picture itself. Which hey, if that's how he was standing, well. That's how he was standing.

[Klesk]

it's just a quick sketch i drew in the math lecture ;)
but i'll try to draw a better picture sometime

my other drawings are here (http://kl3sk.deviantart.com) if anyone is interested

[n00b]

it's just a quick sketch i drew in the math lecture ;)

Looks like we've got something in common.

On the sketch- The gun seems small, like he's pointing Spaz's gun at us, otherwise nice.
On the gallery- Nice stuff, Watching now.

[Anaiyu]

I have to agree with n0 on this. He does have a Chip n Dale look to him, and it's adorable. Very good.

But as far as constructive criticism goes, it wouldn't hurt to look at examples of leg structure and anatomy. Or anatomy in general, actually. Getting a firm grasp on the stuff early on will help you to grow rapidly as an artist.

btw- that photo of your "new hamster" in your gallery.. probably the cutest freakin' hamster i've ever seen.

[Olsen]

I like the "I don't give a (-)" look.

To me, it looks more like: Uh, what? You want a bullet through your head? Okay, sure.

I like it.

[Nonomu198]

Awesome, but remember that Jazz have gigantic feet!

And the gun. It looks 2d

[Doubble Dutch]

Originally Posted by Crimiclown™ View Post
I like the "I don't give a (-)" look.
To me, it looks more like: Uh, what? You want a bullet through your head? Okay, sure.

There's a difference?


I love the style; you don't see variety like that anymore these days.

[Olsen]

There's a difference?

Yeah, in my opinion. What Crimiclown suggested sounds more like a badass, angry cop, while in this Jazz looks really tired and just wants to get it over with, or how to put it.

[Doubble Dutch]

He's had a long day and just wants a long cold carrot juice?

[Olsen]

He's had a long day and just wants a long cold carrot juice?

Works too.

I just realised I really enjoy discussing art. Wow.