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November 5th, 2001, 01:52 PM
In a parellel universe, in the year 5867 A.D., a great dragonlike beast is terrorising the entire universe as destroys planets and turns peaceful inhabitants into his all-powerful armies. Then when the Ryu turns to planet Carrotus, a newborn infant is left in its wake. The dragon shoots a fireball from its mouth, but suddenly, the child screams, and magically the fireball is reflected right back at it. The once-immortal dragon god is destroyed by its own powerful inferno. The rabbit infant is somehow abducted by the planet's gods and taken to the Immortal Realm.
A year later, the old Great One, the being who rules the entire universe, suddenly gives the throne to a rabbit-like immortal named Ryuell. And that's when the trouble started in
The First Chapter In The Saga Of Razz "GenEX" Jackrabbit
(Edit: Changed it so the story fits)
November 12th, 2001, 03:40 PM
Please note that I will only continue if you think that the story is going to be good.
November 25th, 2001, 07:59 PM
Coolioz! GTG to bed now.
November 26th, 2001, 12:41 PM
Kovu aka Alec
November 26th, 2001, 05:13 PM
Could be nifty, Gen
November 26th, 2001, 06:59 PM
Umm, "GenEX" because "Gen" is GuMmYBeAr!s nickname.
November 28th, 2001, 11:36 AM
Of course, it's tough to review if I haven't seen anything more. Let's see a continuation!
November 28th, 2001, 12:58 PM
What was once here is now deleted due to a change in the story's plans. Please hang up and dial your operator so he may ask you what the heck you called him for when he has no idea what you are talking about.
In other words, ignore this post.
November 28th, 2001, 05:52 PM
GIMMIE! CONTINUE! NOW!
November 28th, 2001, 08:31 PM
Here comes another space ghost :Z
Must edit my profile so I'm not accused of the same thing =D
November 29th, 2001, 05:53 AM
Of course, Kaz, there's a difference between having something and DOING something with it. We'll see what happens. Continue on, GX.
November 30th, 2001, 12:52 PM
The young rabbit was blessed with the power of the demi-gods and raised in the Celestial School of Carrotus. Somehow he managed to get nothing but A+ grades in every single class. Unbelievable.
The Supreme God of the Universe, was growing very fearful of this talented young god. Unknown to anybody but his followers, this god was a tyrant who wanted to keep his position as the highest ranking being in the entire universe, and sent would-be rulers on dangerous missions his henchgods came up with, all of them died before they earned immortality and were assigned to their jobs. The Great One was in deep concentration, a concentration so deep that his bad-mouthed wife had to dig him out of it with a steamshovel. Then he came out of thinking, he knew how he would deal with this child...
After a while, he got his first mission. The demi-gods were required to go on numerous missions to earn immortality. They also had to wait for a cataclysmic disaster. Here's what his said:
WE REQUEST YOUR ASSISTANCE WITH SOMETHING THAT THREATENS THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE AND EVEN THE GODS THEMSELVES. WE MIGHT HAVE DONE IT OURSELVES, BUT WE'RE STILL WATCHING THE 24-YEAR MARATHON OF "THE BEST OF THE EARTH'S SUPER BOWL FOOTBALL". I KNOW YOU HAVE EXTREME DISTATE WITH SPORTS, BUT WE'RE SURE YOU CAN HANDLE IT BETTER THAN ANY OF US. YOUR MISSION IS: TO CLOSE THE PORTAL LEADING OUT OF A CERTAIN CHILD'S IMAGINATION. THUS YOU MUST DEFEAT ALL HIS BIZZARE AND DANGEROUS THOUGHTS BEFORE YOU CAN FIND A WAY TO GET OUT. HERE IS WHOM YOU ARE LOOKING FOR: THE CHILD'S NAME IS XAVIER SMITH. NOW YOU MAY CHOOSE ONLY 1 SUPER ABILITY OF THOSE LISTED BELOW. GOOD LUCK.
"Well, I guess I better get ready." He said to nobody in particular.
Out of the huge list of powers, the demi-god was tempted with bad breath, a huge tickling feather, and a very lucky human's foot as his super abilities, but he chose Tyquando novice training. He hopped on his space jet and zoomed off to the portal, singing "We Are The Champions" the entire time.
Edit: God of Universe has had his name changed, and I won't reveal it. Yet...
Edit again: Modified so the story will make more sense.
December 6th, 2001, 02:04 PM
Though there wasn't any actual DEMAND for a continuation, I guess I can make one...
Taking a teleporter to the very edge of the wormhole, our hero(maybe not) pondered the situation. He had never heard Xavier Smith, so he had no idea what he was up against. "Well, I won't find out unless I venture in." And he allowed the vortex to suck him in.
When he landed, he could see a giant glowing outline of a circle. He slowly walked inside it and, without warning, the outline rose into a wall that seemed to go upward perpetually. He had heard of these before, they were arenas with no escape until the opponent was defeated. Bracing himself for whatever may appear, he took the standard Tyquando pose and waited...
February 14th, 2002, 02:19 PM
Suddenly, the ground shook. The startled rabbit looked down and, to his surprise, the ground was falling away, but HE wasn't!
"Must've been an illusion," he said calmly. But what wasn't an illusion was the giant pulsating purple-indigo orb floating in front of him, twelve jet-black tentacles counted around the sphere, and a shape that looked like a sword buried in the ground on its "forehead". Well, I guess I lived I good-if short-life He thought. There has to be a weak spot somewhere-His thinking was interupted when he noticed a glowing green trapezoid on the thing's back. He took note of it, and waited for the beast to attack. Suddenly, it spoke out, its voice deep and angry, "CALIMARE CRUSH INTRUDERS! I DESTROY YOU NOW!" Thus, the monstrous Calimare seemed ready to attack.
February 14th, 2002, 02:21 PM
Calimare used one of its giant tentacles as a whip and aimed for the demi-god's head. But he blocked it with his wrist and dashed toward the beast, dodging tentacles as he went. He was caught off guard and got a nasty bruise from being flung to the arena boundaries. He recovered quickly, biting his bleeding lip, and with unbelievable acrobatic abilities, he leaped over the spherical menace and aimed a roundhouse kick at the glowing spot. Calimare shrieked with agony."NO! CALIMARE NOT LOSE SO EASY! IF... I DIE... THEN... I TAKING... YOU... DOWN WITH... ME!" he screamed as his body glowed brighter and brighter and exploded. The heroic hare got out of the arena just before he was scorched by the oncoming inferno. The chamber shook uneasily all of a sudden, and the rabbit made a dash for the portal. But he paused, looked back, and yelled,"I've seen marshmallows tougher than you, Calimental!" and blew a rasberry at the disappearing portal.
February 15th, 2002, 05:57 PM
Sounds almost like reality!
February 16th, 2002, 11:40 AM
Meanwhile, at the universe's "white house",(the supreme palace, where the most powerful gods live)the great one(the god who ruled the entire universe)was furious with how easily Calimare was defeated. "Quevil! Get in here NOW!" yelled the great one. A short, purple creature appeared. It looked like a leprachaun with glowing yellow eyes and red pupils, and it didn't have a right hand, instead, it had a mace on a hook replacing it. It blinked twice before speaking.
"Oh, goody master, I knew that by disposing of that wannabe you'd give me a promotion! Now don't forget I want to be your advi-AAAAAARG!" He was cut short when the great one threw a dagger at his head, barely missing by an inch.
"I called you here because that that stupid squid Calimare got squashed and hardly scratched that little rat!"
"Oh no, this is worse than I thought! Calimare was your younger brother! I thought that one of the elite sins would finish him easily. I fear we may need to go a bit extreme this time, my Lord."
The great one grinned and asked Quevil,"And do YOU have any suggestions? Hmmm?"
Quevil scratched his head with his right hand. He bit his lip in concentrartion. If he didn't think of something soon, he'd be eaten by one of the beasts for supper. A lightbulb appeared over his head, glowing very radiantly. "I got it!" he exclaimed,"We can send Dibiorus to Diamondus and let him infect the planet with his plauge! It's almost fool-proof!"
The great one just said "You'd better be right this time, for your sake... Now GO!"
Before Quevil left, he stopped at the door, bowed, and said "This will not fail, Lord Ryu." And then left.
February 19th, 2002, 04:45 PM
He recieved another message the instant he got back to school:
A CREATURE KNOWN AS DIBIORUS HAS UNLEASHED A DISEASE UPON THE PLANET DIAMONDUS THAT TURNS INHABITANTS INTO VARIOUS PRECIOUS MINERALS. YOUR MISSION IS TO STOP DIBIORUS. THE DISEASE SHOULD STOP AS SOON AS YOU DO. SELECT THREE NEW ABILITIES.
Now he chose a bag full of everything, healing touch, and medical training degree. "No rest for the best..." He muttered. He grabbed a PB and J sandwhich for a snack and hopped on a scooter. Setting co-ordinates for Diamondus, he punched the accelerator and hurt his fist before remembering his foot operated it.
Arriving on Diamondus, the heroic rabbit noticed a bunch of beautiful lifelike statues made from rubies, sapphires, diamonds, gold, crystal, and glass. The strange thing was they were all in "running-away frightened" poses. "Victims, methinks..."he muttered. He pulled out a life-scanner to pinpoint the location of Dibiorus. It seemed to come from a giant cavern directly ahead of him. The walls were purple with multicolored gems buried in their walls. He decided to stop sightseeing and get to the bottom of this.
When he found Dibiorus, the beast appeared to be sleeping. A hideous monster with a forked tongue, snake hair, a scorpion's tail, 8 giant spider legs, and a mouthful of bloodstained teeth. A symbol that looked like a sword stuck in the ground was seen on the thing's forhead. He dug in his bag for something to kill the beast with and found a forked trident that seemed just his size. Charging at the monstrosity, he yelled at the top of his lungs before he hit Dibiorus. He heard a clank sound and looked up. The trident missed the target. And there, a few feet in front of him, was Dibiorus, awake and angry, pupil-less yellow eyes glowing at him...
February 19th, 2002, 10:59 PM
Kewlish! Continue please!
March 1st, 2002, 11:26 AM
Dibiorus used its 8 legs to run around the cave at high speeds. It ran around the cavern without a pattern, trying to build up speed. "Man, this guy must be doing at least 35 mph," The lil' rabbit god said sounding shocked "Good thing I was born with agility." He took out some lightweight shoes and chased after Dibiorus. The creature jumped momentarily, rotating a full 90 degrees-revealing a familiar symbol on its forhead-and spat a glowing web at him. He just barely missed it, and watched in horror as the spot where it landed began to glow bright red momentarily. The web was deadly hot! He almost didn't see the next one, it just barely missed his left ear. Dibiorus turned its body around and ran, while the head stayed where it was, spitting green slime that smelled horrible. Our main character kept running after Dibiorus, dodging slime as he went. Slowly he was gaining on the beast. He suddenly took a huge leap and-thanks to excellent timing-landed right on Dibiorus' body, directly above its heart, and stomped like crazy. The creature shrieked in agony, and it was slowly dying. In a last effort to take down the really speedy rabbit with it, Dibiorus used all of its remaining strength to strike its scorpion tail at him. He didn't see it soon enough. He yelled in agony as blood dripped from the back of his achile's heel. He was about to take out a bandage and an antidote when suddenly his blood hardened, and turned into a ruby. Suddenly his entire leg was made of ruby. The child was begining to see spots in front of his eyes. He felt dizzy and weak. Then everything faded to black...
March 1st, 2002, 08:37 PM
about time it wasn't just you and your defeats, and king ryu, isn't that considered a personal attack?
March 2nd, 2002, 11:02 AM
Since you obviously haven't noticed, I'm trying to give the story a pinch of reality. Ryu is/was my worst enemy, and at one point I thought he was trying to take over JJ2. He called himself the great one, too. That's why he's there.
Personal attack? Get real, he's the main villain in the story. It's more of a compliment than an insult. And if I told you more, it would ruin the whole plot. So sit tight and don't complain about personal attacks.
March 2nd, 2002, 12:07 PM
Like you don't play god =P, well continue.
March 15th, 2002, 12:35 PM
Finally, new continuation.
As his head was turned to stone, the child's arms fell limp. But when his fingers hit his petrified side, he healed all at once. Dibiorus suddenly spoke in its dying breath. "Foolish mortal... my brothers... and sisters... shall... avenge me..." Puzzled, the rabbit asked, "Who are they?" "Did you not realise... I am one of... the Elite Sins? I am illness... one of the... most feared... we... have our orders... from lord Ryu... to destroy you... your life will... be short... so make the best... of your remaining days... arg!" and Dibiorus exploded in a flash of white light. But our hero was puzzled. How was Ryu still alive? Who were the Seven Evils? And how could a dying beast be so cocky as if he had already won?
The plot thickens...
March 15th, 2002, 09:22 PM
I won't say it.
March 15th, 2002, 10:09 PM
WOW! THESE REALLY HAVE A PINCH OF REALITY!!!
*If you didn't get that... that was deep deep sarcasm...
March 16th, 2002, 05:26 AM
Yes these do have a pinch of reality..
March 16th, 2002, 09:14 AM
To be quite honest, it has a pinch of just about everything. Some stuff is taken from various places. Although I can't remember what right now...
"Quevil, Quevil, get your ugly face in here now!" shouted Ryuell, in outrage. Quevil came in wearing a hardhat, and it worked. Ryuell's dagger was shattered to pieces when it hit. "Eheheheh. I took a few precautions. So sorry to hear your sister Dibiorus was killed but I think you should get over it." Quevil suggested. "Me? Sad because I lost some worthless sibling?" said Ryuell. "Hardly! I don't care who dies as long as I can take my revenge on that brat. Send my older brother Feobias to a random location. And do not fail me this time!" Quevil scurried out the door in a flash. Ryu thought to himself.
Perhaps there was a reason I could not defeat him as an infant. But what kind of power could deflect my flame? I had destroyed many gods' immortality and killed them afterwards, but now my power has been cut by 85%. Even though I am still powerful, I want to be able to recover before I wipe that smug look off the rotten kid's face! I just need time...
March 23rd, 2002, 11:08 AM
Great Story! Please continue soon:)
March 23rd, 2002, 06:50 PM
BAH!!! YOUR <S>SORT OF</S> THE REASON FOR THE UNPOPULARITY!!!
March 31st, 2002, 05:10 PM
The young rabbit recieved yet another mission, fortunately he had a week to recover from his encounter with Dibiorus. He was suddenly quite curious about these missions. Before, there were few reasons to give an up and coming immortal a mission. But after that fierce new immortal, Ryuell took up the position of Great One, young demigods were sent on various quests daily, and 9 out of 10 never came back. He was pondering the possibilities when suddenly the mission probe suddenly appeared in front of his face. It read:
FEOBIA HAS INFILTRATED THE SCHOOL AND IS SEARCHING FOR YOU! QUICKLY CHOOSE 5 NEW ABILITIES AND GET RID OF THIS MONSTROSITY!
In the list that followed, the bunny boy chose the protective and styling Radiant Armor, element-based projectiles that could be thrown from his fists, stronger physical strength, a mechanical arm that could be called upon when needed, and heat vision. But as soon as he finished, he heard a strange noise that sounded like talking fog, he looked up, and it looked like it was exactly what he thought it was. Talking fog! But it looked like it was alive somehow. Suddenly, two gleaming souless green eyes opened up and stared at him out of the deep black haze, and the familiar sword-shaped mark appeared on where its forhead might be. The creature lunged at him and engulfed him in the smog. Then the rabbit fell unconsious into a nightmare. The haze moved out of his room and took the shaking rabbit with him. Suddenly it arrived in front of Ryuell. Ryuell grinned and said "Well done, Feobia, you have brought me the youth who defeated me before. Now you may leave." Thus, Feobia left. Ryuell suddenly squirmed about and seemed to be shedding his skin. A giant dark green dragon emerged, dark bottomless eyes, slits for nostrils, a mouth of deadly sharp teeth, a long tail lined with various sharp ridges, and two skeletal batlike wings. It was Ryu. He took in a deep, deep breath, and exhaled an inferno of jet black flames that engulfed the rabbit, instantly incinerating him while he was still in the coma. He was gone, and now Ryu had nothing to stop him from taking over the universe...
Is this the end of me? Not quite, but it's the end of My Story, which is only Part One of my quest to defeat Ryu. Keep your eyes open for the second part of the thrilling story of my life:
The Generation of Extermination
Coming soon to the War Tavern forum. But for now, that's all, folks!
March 31st, 2002, 06:42 PM
Gee, wonder what happens next... sort of in a way and sort of not.
March 31st, 2002, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by GenEXMRT
The First Chapter In The Saga Of Razz "GenEX" Jackrabbit
Just noticed that, erm, there already is a Razz in teh games and he ain't a god, his Eva's cousin, a pilot-mechanic, so...
April 1st, 2002, 04:31 AM
I know that, but I'm him, except reborn at a much younger age and raised differently. I'll explain it in the new story.
Don't let the suspense drive you insane...
Btw, does anybody know the exact date that Jazz, Spaz, and Lori were born? I need to know.
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