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ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 12:47 PM
She was a young rabbit, in fact, she was the youngest rabbit in her clan. But that did not

interfere with her fighting. Zuthastra was a warrior born and bred. Nobeast had ever bested

her in fighting. She was tough, and there was no question about that. But now there was a

problem. A new group of warriors had sprung up in the past years....ED...... She hated those

rabbits to the bone. They called themselves Elite Deulers, and they, to her, were worse than

Gringo and Gummybear put together. But, sadly, thier rabbits were too numerous to count.

they could defeat her and her clan by sheer number only...............



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Years had passed, Zuthastra was now 18, she had gained many more clan members...

and many more enemys. Her fur was golden-yellow. She still had that muscular

lean look, but now a scar disfigured part of her cheek. She kept her long gold-red hair pulled

back in a braid that hung down to her knees. Her sister Nova was her constant companion

so was her best friend Matrix. Her clan,the Wolverine Warriors had grown stronger, tougher

and were giving the Elite Deulers a hard time. Zuthastra smiled to herself, it would soon be time

to strike back at ED. She turned to look over the mountains of Diamondus. She spun around as she felt an evil presence behind her

......to be continued.......

Ducky
Apr 6, 2001, 12:53 PM
Diamondus, my fave http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Alrighty then, yes, continue, please http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

`Ducky

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 12:54 PM
I need some characters http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 01:17 PM
Ness[ED] was snivling behind her.

"A message, a message", he whined." O yes,"

Zuthastra sneeered,"and how long have u been here spying on me?". She pulled out her

uzi and half aimed it at him." O no, no great one," Ness squealed," don't shoot me"

He tried to hide behind his ears. "You know," said Zuthastra with discust," i can't see how u got to be an Elite Deuler... But

tell me the message.. Let me guess.. It is from the great Jman himself?" Ness almost fell over his ears nodding so hard. "O yes

great queen, from the great one himself", he wimpered, "He says you must give up this futile guesture of rebellion-"

His frantic blubbering was cut of immediatly

as he was roughly hauled to his feet by two

husky rabbits. Zuthastra smiled slightly

and nodded towards the mountains to the east. "Thank u Matrix, u to Nova. Escort him to the edges of our boundarys.

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 01:22 PM
O ya http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

To Be Continued.......

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 01:24 PM
O ya http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

To Be Continued.......

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 01:25 PM
Ooops http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 01:45 PM
The rabbits dashed off, dragging the reluctant Ness between them. Zuthastra shook her head unbelievingly, "Sometimes i wonder

how he ever got the title ED". She chuckled softly, remembering the time her brother Moonshadow deuled him. Three to nothing, he had said, pretty easy to believe,

she thought. But the Wolverine Warriors of course, were a whole different kind of fighters.

But now her brother, was captive to the

ED, not all ED where wimps, and the time had come to strike back at the Elite Deulers, and rescue Moonshadow.....

To Be Continued.....

ZUTHASTRA
Apr 6, 2001, 02:22 PM
Hey, i still need some more characters

http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif http://jazz2.nagcentral.com/forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

megamewtwo
May 6, 2001, 10:20 AM
Hey Zuth, I know it's been a month since the last post, but I can give a touch of help.



While they Dragged Ness to the mountains, a Large, 11 foot by 22 foot shadow had just flown past to their left. Again, the shadow flew past, in the opposite direction on their right. Ness glances through his ears, flopped infront of his face, and noticed what was making the gigantic shadow. "Fellow SSB..." Ness murmured. The creature that made the gigantic shadow looked, and noticed Ness being dragged. The creature, As big as his shadow, Flew infront of the four rabbits and, in mid-land, pulled out a Gigantic soward made of some black material with a red edge when he grasped the handle. The two gems on the side of the handles glew with a brillant glow, even in the middle of the day. When the creature landed, They got a good glimpse of the creature. He was a Gigantic Brown and Purple dragon with Gigantic Black Claws. His feet had the same claws on them and his deep voice boomed from his mouth. "Drop the SSB." He says. Zuthastra then glares him in the eyes and says, "Who are you?" The Gigantic Dragon then looks at her and says, "Rith. I am an SSB, but not an [ED] like you where thinking of. He may be too weak right now to give any answers, but give him time and hospalitity and he may give you answers no problem." Matrix then says, "The closest town is 35 Miles away, and It's an [ED] controlled town!" Rith then glares her in the eyes and says, "Hop on my back. The closest town isn't as far as you think."

<Center>~To be Continued~</centered>

Coppertop
May 9, 2001, 01:13 PM
I'll join! Sorry, but if you want my prof you'll have to go that Profile Thread of Kiku's. Use the latest one, pleez. . .



Oh, the story! Spiffular and all the rest of those praises. . .

~*Alpha*~
May 12, 2001, 02:54 PM
um, bad news guys, but she cant write more because she is gone for awhile

Coppertop
May 15, 2001, 03:08 PM
*grumble* Get BACK HERE!!!!!!