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Unhit
Jun 30, 2002, 01:39 AM
Ok. As you know, I'm a Star Wars freak.
Now, I want to do a Jazz2- Star Wars- Episode, which means you all can participate. Of course good will win ;), and there will never be an empire and bla :)...

WHO WANTS TO BE IN THAT STORY? And who do you want to be? You can also create a completely new character.

I either am Obi-Wan (because he's so cool :p) or Anakin (because Padmé rocks so much ;)).

Skulg
Jun 30, 2002, 06:10 AM
Originally posted by Unhit
WHO WANTS TO BE IN THAT STORY?
ME ME ME ME! OH PLEEEEEZE UNHIT! MEEEE! :D :D :D

Unhit
Jun 30, 2002, 06:25 AM
Of course ;).
Give me some info about the character you'd like to play :). What about Mara Jade or Sev' Rance Tann (they never appear in the movies, but are part of the behind-scenes-stories)?

Skulg
Jun 30, 2002, 07:04 AM
Originally posted by Unhit
Give me some info about the character you'd like to play :).
JABBA THE HUTT! No? Okay.

I'll think of something. :)

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jun 30, 2002, 07:05 AM
I'd like to be in your story :D
I'll give you the charather details if you accept it...:rolleyes:

Skulg
Jun 30, 2002, 08:02 AM
Okay, here we go:

<b>Name:</b> Can I keep "Scary Sarry"? If not, suggest something. :P
<b>Age:</b> unknown, but definitely not old.
<b>Gender:</b> Female
<b>Species:</b> Cat (without my wings and the ability to morph), if that doesn't fit, then human.
<b>Fur (if a cat):</b> White
<b>Hairstyle:</b> Long black hair
<b>Clothes:</b> -> See "Everyone's characters."
<b>Appearance:</b> Slim, quite tall and wiry.
<b>Weapon of choice:</b> A big heavy blaster. She also likes flamethrowers.
<b>Vehicle of choice:</b> A <a href="http://www.baltech.com/techmages/glider_lil.JPG">Death Glider</a> (but more gray than this one) (from "Stargate", she stole it from the Goa'Uld :D)
She also has a podracer. I can draw it if it's necessary.
<b>Family:</b> Unknown.

<b>Personality:</b> Sarry is a loner. She's a silent person and can be quite friendly, but she gets mad very fast. She isn't sure on which side she sould be, but she helps the good guys.

<b>Biography:</b> Sarry was born on some planet (I didn't think of a name for it yet xD), but she was expelled from it. Now she lives on <a href="http://www.macgamer.com/resources/racer/faqstratguide/semipro/dug_derby-01-big.jpg">Malastare</a> (you might know the planet from "Star Wars Episode 1: Racer") and earns money with Podracing.


I'll think of more later. I'll edit this post then.

Unhit
Jun 30, 2002, 10:31 AM
OK, thx, Skulg. And you, Moonblaze, I need your character. If possible, a little bit star wars kind :).
As soon as I got 5 characters, I'll start with the story.

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jun 30, 2002, 11:00 AM
<b>Name:</b> Should be Moonblazer but people know <strike>it</strike> him as Moonrazer.
<b>Nickname:</b> The thing that's boncy hunter.
<b>Age:</b> Uknown.
<b>Gender:</b> Male.
<b>Species:</b> Rabbit/Wolf.
<b>Fur:</b> Dark Blue.
<b>Clothes:</b> He wears a cloak.
<b>Eyes:</b> Dark Yellow, eyerings.
<b>Appearance:</b> Low, looks tired, has a wolf look.
<b>Skills:</b> Hiding, hunting.
<b>Personality:</b> A Yoda when he meets Luke Skywalker first time.
<b>Occupation:</b> Boncy hunter.
<b>Likes:</b> Staying safe.
<b>Dislikes:</b> Robots! Any kind of Robots!
<b>Friends:</b> Depends on role, your choise.
<b>Enemies:</b> Someone you find wrothy to die.
<strike><b>Symbol:</b> Robot with a red X over it.</strike>

Skulg
Jun 30, 2002, 11:07 AM
Oh, and (if that's possible (OH PLEEZE UNHIT! :D)) Sarry has a little "friend", her <a href="http://www.starwarssource.net/Characters/Droidekas/droidekas.php">Droideca</a> (I must invent a name for it...).
Kinda like Han Solo with his buddy Chewbacca.

Enigma
Jun 30, 2002, 11:11 AM
*clings to unhit's leg* I wanna be an R2!! but maybe one that can actually communicate, hehe... ok, let's see for the details...

Name: R2Enig :D
Age: let's say 5 years
Gender: N/A
Species: droid
<s>Fur</s> Plating: light blue with some light green squares (that ought to scare those darksiders :D)
Clothes: when's the last time you saw a droid wearing clothes? ;-P
Weapons: small laser gun and stun gun, for self-defense only
Personality: likes to hang out with other droids, hates everything that's dark and evil. always prepared to help those poor humans out when necessary :) likes to tease any droid that looks like C3PO
History: served on Kamino for a few years, and somehow got into this story now ;)

Edit: personality: hates everything that's dark and evil. Except for Skulg of course ;)

Skulg
Jun 30, 2002, 11:13 AM
Originally posted by Enigma
(...) hates everything that's dark and evil.
BLEH!

;)

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jun 30, 2002, 11:46 AM
Ow yea *edits dislikes*

Enigma
Jun 30, 2002, 11:51 AM
*prods moonblaze with stun gun* hehehehe... don't hate the poor robots or i will do this until the story ends :D
oh, and skulg, i made a little edit for you in my "personality" :)

Batty Buddy
Jun 30, 2002, 09:32 PM
Que Passa!!!!

I could convert myself into a good droid character...

Name: Ba-T Bu-D
Age: Do droids even age?
Species: Droid.
Personality: Talks in normal languages(Unlike that walking trashcan). A bit of a cravin little coward, but I can usually be talked into doing something I normally wouldn't do if need be.
Apperances: A small droid... Wearing sunglasses?!?!
Weapons: A small blaster for normal stuff, and a huge blaster thats bigger then me for when I get mad.
Powers: Infared vision, radar, and flight(Jet pack). Sadly, I STILL have increadably bad luck- I'm bound by Murpheys law of everything that can go wrong going wrong.

Unhit
Jun 30, 2002, 11:36 PM
Originally posted by $kúlg
Oh, and (if that's possible (OH PLEEZE UNHIT! :D)) Sarry has a little "friend", her <a href="http://www.starwarssource.net/Characters/Droidekas/droidekas.php">Droideca</a> (I must invent a name for it...).
Kinda like Han Solo with his buddy Chewbacca.

Of course, Skulg! I loce these droids...
And he will help us, cause R2Enig did some brainwash (formatted his harddisk etc :p).

Ok, we got now:
- me (Jedi)
- Skulg (something else :p) and her droideca
- Enigma (a repair droid)
- Batty Buddy (a small droid)
- Moonblaze ( a wolf, kind of a bounty hunter)

I will start wrting it on Wednesday or Thursday. If you still want to be in the story, hurry ;)!

Super Saiyan
Jul 1, 2002, 12:18 AM
Dont forget about me !! :mad:


I wanna be a alien from outta space which attacks that whole planet and then BOOOM!!!!!!:lol:



I think you know how exactly I look like :)

greenberet
Jul 1, 2002, 01:46 AM
hey plz let me be in it unhit!
(ok, I'm at school, and he told me to post here, but anyway...)
<b>Name:</b>Lt.C. Gerret, "chief" for friends ;)
<b>Nickname:</b> EH! or U THERE!
<b>Age:</b> no one knows... anti-aging-potions rule, U know...
<b>Gender:</b> Male
<b>Species:</b> human with a modified genom
<b>Skin:</b> normal human skin, a bit scandinavian or irish or so
<b>Hair:</b> light brown
<b>Clothes:</b> black, green and white
<b>Eyes:</b> steel blue with a dark shadow
<b>Appearance:</b> typical 4 a LtC, like a leader
<b>Skills:</b> dominating aura
<b>Special abilities:</b> good shooter with his freezer or homings
<b>Personality:</b> bad, kickass dude... :D
<b>Occupation:</b> LtC of the bad boyz
<b>Likes:</b> fast vessels
<b>Dislikes:</b> Jedi Knights, any1 "good"
<b>Friends:</b> no need of them, he has his squad
<b>Enemies:</b> any1 of the jedi or jazz position or so... the good, in short
<b>Family:</b> parents were eaten up by a wolf-like creature, he's searching it and wants kill it... REVENGE! mwahahahaaaa
<b>Lives:</b> super star destroyer "blackhawk"
<b>Symbol:</b> his three colors (black, green and white) as a flag, in fornt of it two seekers crossing

U asked 4 a bad guy... :D

EDIT:
fixed some wrong spellings, and to those who say the bad will lose: R U sure? :P
pic of symbol will come, and the char-pic--- ugh... *hides his bad school paintings*

Mariek
Jul 1, 2002, 02:28 AM
Oh pleaseee...Can I be in your story?
Pleaseee...:)
I'd like to be a light-blue or purple rabbit :p

Skulg
Jul 1, 2002, 04:22 AM
Originally posted by Enigma
oh, and skulg, i made a little edit for you in my "personality" :)
LOL... hehe, thank you :D

Here's a crappy, dirty and really ugly pic of my character (with a ripped background), btw (which I drew yesterday at 0:15 PM or something...):
http://home.t-online.de/home/WHaun/galerie/swsarry.gif
(Here you can see Sarry with other clothes. She doesn't ALWAYS wear the same ones. ;)
And please ignore the belt. It looks terrible.)

(I love talking in brackets.)

BTW: The Droideca's name is "RX-13", but Sarry calls him "Bud".

Unhit
Jul 1, 2002, 04:52 AM
Nice, Skulg!

Well, finally a bad guy. You know you'll lose ;)?

Fawriel
Jul 1, 2002, 05:57 AM
MEEEEEEEEEE TOOOOOO!!!!!!
I wanna be an unimportant strong Jedi killing some strong opponents.
My charakter is here (http://www.jazz2online.com/jcf/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4751)

And at the end,I wanna leave my live to save some important people....with theatralical music.....in slo-mo...*dreams*

Unhit
Jul 1, 2002, 06:34 AM
Ok. A pathetic hero........

Fawriel
Jul 1, 2002, 06:46 AM
Yeah,sure,humiliate the Piccolo!:o

Flint LP
Jul 1, 2002, 09:38 AM
Pick me! Pick me!

Ill be "Chiefs" second in command.
I am kind of mentally slow, and always calm, maybe a little too calm. I am the kind of evil dude that has die- hard loyalty, unless someone else pays him more. He is really self centered. HE is a male, and protects himself(and kills good guys) with a blaster and he is a little bit of a dark jedi( he can choke PPL from long range and also has OK skillswith a lightsaber.):rolleyes: I'll wear anything I don't care what.

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jul 1, 2002, 10:03 AM
Originally posted by $kúlg
http://home.t-online.de/home/WHaun/galerie/swsarry.gifI. LOVE. IT.
Btw. Unhit, I'd the charather more wrothy for your use...*sight* ;P

Unhit
Jul 1, 2002, 10:13 AM
I'll take a team of good guys. Exactly 5. You, Skulg, Enigma, Batty Buddy and me. Well, 6. With Piccolo. But as he said, he dies like a hero. So we will be attacked at the beginning when we don't think of it...and...well, you'll see ;P!
The evil ones are at the moment GreenBeret and FlintLP. I guess at least 3 would be nice. Any volunteers :p?

Violet CLM
Jul 1, 2002, 01:14 PM
Name: It is... unknown. Bwahahahahahahahaha(ha)ha.
Nickname: Him.
Age: Our interviewer didn't get that far.
Gender: Male
Species: Beserker.
Skin: Brownish.
Hair: Red.
Clothes: Gold armbands, black boots, black shorts, an eyepatch (black), and a red belt.
Eyes: Red, obviously.
Appearance: If you see him, he's generally charging at you madly, without thinking of danger.
Skills: The strong arms are paticularly useful for lopping off 'eads.
Special abilities: He has this odd talent of avoiding bullets..
Personality: He's a beserker. I told you.
Occupation: Pretty much a bounty hunter, assuming he's not in a kill frenzy when you try to hire him. He doesn't care what side he's fighting for.
Likes: Things that put an "M" rating on games.
Friends: Dead, all dead..
Enemies: Whoever is in his way.
Family: He doesn't talk about them, but then, he doesn't talk much anyway.
Lives: In a compactable tent he carries in one boot.


Ok, that was weird.

Ducky
Jul 1, 2002, 05:02 PM
Hey dude...obviously I've been slacking off the modding duties cause I didn't see this.

I would so love to be in this. Have you room for another?
Am flexible. I can be bad or good, probably bad cause you'll seem to need one. Here's a small profile?

Yay. *Bounces at the thought of being a sith*
Um, also, we're furries, right?

Name:...geez. Ducky is SO un-Sithish. My name's Virge.
Age: About 19.
Gender: Female.
Species: Lopeared rabbit.
Hair: Dark reddish brown, straight, about hip length with anime-sort of bangs. You know, they stick up..
Eyes:Very light green.
Fur:Grey, with dark tips at the ears.
Appearance:Average height, but unhealthily thin, like anorexic, with a rather thin, pale face. Her ears are tattooed and she keeps them folded back like an angry cat.
Clothes:A luffly black cloak over a grey tunic and boots. Reddish, woven belt and Dark grey band around her forehead.
Weapon(s): Lightsaber, of course, but instead of the usual red for sith it's white. Generally carries a small laser gun thing.
Personality: Aloof. Too courageous. Pained.
Skills: Uses the Force more then hand to hand combat(i.e, throwing things at people, twisting their minds.)and is very good at messing with people's minds.
Occupation? Loner Sith.
Likes:Swift deaths, blue hair, and Obi-Wan.
Dislikes:Watching pain, the fact she will never be called "Darth".
Friends: She's generally a loner. Tries to keep her friends out of it.
Trasportation: Something that's about the equivalent of a Lamborghini in a space ship. Sleek, fast and evil looking. Purple.


Note: I'm somewhat the equivalent of a female Darth Maul.
Thank you.

Unhit
Jul 2, 2002, 03:54 AM
OK, Unknown is really weird ;).

And nice to see an evil lord, Ducky :). I'll start as soon as I finished all stuff for school this week, which mean late Thursday or Friday.

Thanks for your wishes to take part!

Btw: nice name, Ducky ;P!

SoulFirE
Jul 2, 2002, 05:44 AM
Hey Unh, can I still be in??

I know you needed only 3 bad guys, but... Ducky could also be good...unlehess you've already started writing..

Name: Darth SolDeth
Age: unknown, very unknown...
Gender: Male
Species: Unknown, human-like
Hairstyle: Hidden by cloak
Clothes: Black Sith cloak
Weapon of choice: A double red lightsaber (like DM's
Vehicle of choice: A Evil Sith vehicle (much like DM's)
Family: Some happy furry bears and some wabbits!! J/K, no family

Personality: Has much knowlegde of the Force, can see many things before they happen, is an extremely strong fighter, and stuff...

Biography: No-one know a thing about him, except that he is deadly >)

Hope ya can still add me to your story :)


So he's just a Darth Maul, without the tatooed fave and with long brown hairs..
He's like the Evil Lord of the story..i hope.....bleh....

Unhit
Jul 2, 2002, 06:29 AM
You are Darth Maul? Fine. You know I'm Obi-Wan :D?

Skulg
Jul 2, 2002, 09:49 AM
Originally posted by Unhit
You know I'm Obi-Wan :D?
Whoa! Really? That surprises me!

;)

Ducky
Jul 2, 2002, 10:23 AM
I'D be Obi-Wan if our beluffed author here hadn't snagged him first. Mrrrf.


Oops. I realised I forgot something. Haha. I shall <s>ab</s>use the edit option.
We're supposed to be furry, right? I mean my char is furry. That's fine?
Also I just saw a picture in a comic that I really like. Can I make a change to me?

`Ducky

Unhit
Jul 2, 2002, 10:35 AM
Originally posted by Ducky
I'D be Obi-Wan if our beluffed author here hadn't snagged him first. Mrrrf.

You could be my clone ;)!

Ducky
Jul 2, 2002, 10:37 AM
Ahaha.

*cackles with glee*

No, I'll just harbor a crush.

>>Møønßlãzé<<
Jul 2, 2002, 11:38 AM
Originally posted by Unhit
You know I'm Obi-Wan :D? Whoa! Really? That surprises me!

;)
<strike>Blazey, the evil copycat</strike>

SoulFirE
Jul 2, 2002, 12:36 PM
"You are Darth Maul? Fine. You know I'm Obi-Wan ?"

I'm <b>like</b> DM, but I'm stronger :D

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 2, 2002, 05:12 PM
Hmm is it too late? Can I be an NPC, that tends to show up often? Maybe a merchant or a shuttle driver, whatever. Or anything that comes to mind. Or everything that comes to mind ;) ( "Hey, weren't you the owner of the shop back on the planet?" "I'm the shuttle driver too, got a problem with that?") :lol:

Hmmm...

Name : Anotho (As you can see, I like playing around with variations of my name. How creative I am! ;) )
Gender : Male
Species : Rabbit
Occupation : Just about anything, but dislikes action
Alignment : Neutral, just wants money
Likes : Money
Dislikes : Combat, a real coward when threatened. Also dislikes ppl stealing from him

Should be interesting if you can fit him in!

Trafton AT
Jul 2, 2002, 08:28 PM
lol

Unhit
Jul 3, 2002, 06:39 AM
OK Aj2f, youll be something like Watto then. OK :)?

defalcon
Jul 3, 2002, 08:04 AM
Unhit, you can't leave ME out of a Star Wars story!
Check the 'Everyone's Characters' for my profile

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 3, 2002, 08:09 AM
Originally posted by defalcon
Satar Wars

Umm.... you might want to spell that "star". ;)

defalcon
Jul 3, 2002, 08:12 AM
I erm...did....afterwards. :p

White Rabbit
Jul 3, 2002, 08:57 AM
ME! ME! ME! COOOOOOOOME ON! CHOOSE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, here I am. :p

Name: Captain Skan Nivax....er...just Captain White (his first name is unknown for unknown purposes and the only person who does know his unknown name is another unknown person with a weird unknown name ;))

Personality: HEROIC!! :D Nah, just kidding. He's friendly and is a good leader. Although he's nice to ppl, he can be quite harsh if someone fails or does a mistake. Oh, and he trusts ppl too easily (just like me :().

Appearance: Er... White fur. White blaster. White ears. White hair. :D And also, he wears a red backpack when he wants to "toughen up" he wears a red cap. ;)

Skills: Cpt White isn't a Jedi knight so he doesn't know how to use a lightsaber or the force (hah! spelled it with a small f :p). He is great with the blaster though and he also knows lots of battle tactics. Oh, and he's a decent pilot too. :D

Weapons: Two white blasters. They both fire twin red laser bolts. A whip. A utility belt (it's black, not a kind of gold Batman belt)

And um...
this is all. :D

P.S.
ME! ME! ME! COOOOOOOOME ON! CHOOSE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 3, 2002, 09:09 AM
On another note, if you don't shorten your sig, it will make reading this topic very unpleasant.

Unhit
Jul 3, 2002, 09:52 AM
Originally posted by defalcon
Unhit, you can't leave ME out of a Star Wars story!
Check the 'Everyone's Characters' for my profile

I already wondered when you'd finally post here, my Padawan.

Ok. I'll start writing the story on Saturday, and it will just handle what had happened if Palpatine never became Lord Chancellor. It will be separated into six Episodes. Probably :D.

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 3, 2002, 10:31 AM
Cool! :D

Batty Buddy
Jul 3, 2002, 08:44 PM
Que Passa!!!!

ME CAN'T WAIT FOR STORY TO START!!!!

"Why are you all the same as eachother."
"Well, you are the same as yourself, right?"
"This is true..."
"Well then?"
"...But unhelpfull!"
"We're CLONES!"
"Ah- Clones... I've heard of that; you mean there was origionally one of you, then exact copies were made, and now there are THREE of you!"
"Yes- except that there are over seventy eight thousand million of us."
"What?!?!"
"It's ok, the others aren't here at the moment... Can we get on with the work?"
"....... Thats rather a lot, isn't it?"
-Conversation
Hitchhikers Guide to the Galixy- radio program.

Violet CLM
Jul 3, 2002, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by Another Jazz 2 fan Umm.... you might want to spell that "star". ;)

I personally opt for "Satire Wars".

Unhit
Jul 4, 2002, 01:45 AM
:lol: @ Batty Buddy and Unknown.

Btw, I've *hand-written* Episode I. I won't tell you what happens :). You will see it on this board this Saturday.

Skulg
Jul 4, 2002, 03:49 AM
Yeah yeah yeeaaaaaaaahhh!!!

Fawriel
Jul 4, 2002, 08:50 AM
Remember my char!
I'm a Jedi strong enough to fight without weapons and a silent attitude!!!!!!!!
(Didn't I mention it before?
Well,oops!:D )

Unhit
Jul 4, 2002, 10:24 AM
You will be the tragic hero ;). I already know something.....

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 4, 2002, 10:30 AM
I am finding it hard to wait until the weekend for the story...

(BTW, wasn't that pathetic hero?)

Fawriel
Jul 4, 2002, 10:41 AM
HEY!!!!!!

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 4, 2002, 07:45 PM
:D Umm... just restating what he said... that's... all...







really.... ;)

Stijn
Jul 5, 2002, 02:47 AM
I want to join, gah. Read my char at 4I Falcons thread.

Unhit
Jul 5, 2002, 06:49 AM
For all of you that would like to know when etc. the story plays, here's some info.
I btw changed some character info. Tell me if it's not ok ;P!

<b>Pre-Story</b>

The story's first part acts about 4 years after the original story of Episode I. Darth Maul never appeared until that moment, and Valorum is still chancellor in the Galactic Senate. Additionally, Amidala's second periode of reign just started.
Anakin became Padawan of Jedi-Master Obi-Wan Kenobi.
Four years ago, they found Anakin on a travel from Naboo. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon were sent to get Queen Amidala because she wanted to visit Coruscant and the Senate. The Naboo just had made peace with the Gungans, and so she wanted to make a query if they will also get votes etc.
On the travel to Coruscant, they were not shot or something else, they just had a problem with their engine & the shield generator. So they land on Tatooine, where they meet Anakin etc.

Now, four years later. Padmé is Queen, Valorum Chancellor, everything allright. But the Jedi Council knows that something evil is growing up. Additionally, there are lots of enemies of the Galactic Republic in the Galactic Senate. Together, they form the Confederation, with their most important members which are the Trade Federation, the Intergalactic Bank Clan and the Technology Union. The Confederation has Lord Tyranus, the former Jedi Count Dooku, as their leader. They have huge armies on Geonosis and Neimodia and are already planning to attack the Republic on several planets, for example at Sarapine, where the Republic gets most of its electric energy from. But there is no war yet, and the "good" side of the Senate doesn't know about the Confederation's armies.
Also, they have a lot of Sith addicts. Lord Sidious and Lord Tyranus train a lot for to defeat Yoda and his Masters/Knights/Padawans.
But they also don't know about the clone army. Obi-Wan occassionally came to Kamino, after his friend Dex told him about this planet in a long night. As he did not find it in the Jedi archives and knew they were cloners, he asked the Jedi Council to go there and visit it.
When he told the Jedi Council what was going there, they were shocked, but they told him not to tell anyone what was going on. They knew of the dark danger hiding somewhere, and they thought they could need an army to defeat them. But they feared that if the Senate would know about this, even more star system would leave the Republic because of the preparation of a war. They did not even tell Valorum about this.

The situation is confusing now. Padmé is again on a travel to Coruscant, not guarded by anyone but a few Naboo Star Fighters.
She also feels something dark is going on and knows Obi-Wan is hiding something to her.
This is were my Episode I starts: when Padmé just starts her trip vom Naboo to Coruscant.



<b>Actors</b>


<i><b>The Jedi Council
The Galactic Senate
The Confederation's leaders
Naboo's Royal Guard</i></b>
and lots of other people


<b>THE GOOD</b>

<i><b>Padmé Amidala</i></b>
Queen of Naboo
<i>Me (Unhit)</i>

<i><b>Obi-Wan Kenobi</i></b>
Jedi Knight
<i>Me (Unhit)</i>

<i><b>Sca-Re Sarie</i></b>
Member of the Senate Guard.
<i>Skulg</i>

<i><b>R2-D2</i></b>
Repairing droid
<i>Enigma</i>

<i><b>C-3PO</i></b>
Protocol Droid
<i>Batty Buddy</i>

<i><b>Bian Wikte</i></b>
Former Jedi
<i>Piccolo</i>

<i><b>Anotho</i></b>
Bounty Hunter. Payed from the Jedi Council, that's why he's a nice guy here ;P.
<i>AJ2F</i>

<i><b>Anakin Skywalker</i></b>
Jedi Padawan
<i>Defalcon</i>

<i><b>Captain Skan Nivax</i></b>
Captain in the Queen's Royal Guard.
<i>White Rabbit</i>

<i><b>Bren Pain</i></b>
Soldier in the Queen's Royal Guard.
<i>Flash</i>


<b>THE EVIL</b>

<i><b>Moon Raizor</i></b>
Sith Addict
<i>Moonblaze</i>

<i><b>Say Jan</i></b>
Evil alien :p.
<i>Super Saiyan</i>

<i><b>Ben Gerret</i></b>
Sith Knight
<i>Green Beret</i>

<i><b>Jango Fett</i></b>
Bounty Hunter
<i>Flint LP</i>

<i><b>?</i></b>
Brothal Sith Knight
<i>Unknown Rabbit</i>

<i><b>Virge</i></b>
Powerful Sith Lord
<i>Ducky</i>

<i><b>Darth Maul</i></b>
Sith Knight
<i>SoulFire</i>


Hope I did not forget anyone. And sorry for the chaos ;P! And as you see, I changed some names to the "original" ones. So Enigma became R2-D2. Only those who really are "new" got new names too.

White Rabbit
Jul 5, 2002, 08:25 AM
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL.

I didn't want my name to be Skan Nivax! I CLEARLY said Captain White.

But oh well, Captain Nivax is great too. :D
And yer story is greater! ;P

Fawriel
Jul 5, 2002, 09:46 AM
Bian Wikte,huh?

Glad you looked at my personalitie.
But how for heavens sake do you pronounce it?????:p

SoulFirE
Jul 5, 2002, 10:18 AM
Well, so far you've only rewrote episode one and two :p
I can't wait for the real story to begiiin!

And mah name wasnt Darth Maul, everybody has got cool names except me.... ah never mind, I like it this way.. just write yer story!

Another Jazz 2 fan
Jul 5, 2002, 11:12 AM
Well, you certainly did take a creative license with people's characters, but that's fine with me. Can't wait to see what you do with them!

Violet CLM
Jul 5, 2002, 01:18 PM
Originally posted by Unhit
<i><b>Ba-T Bu-D</i></b>
Protocol Droid
<i>Batty Buddy</i>

<i><b>Ba-T Bu-D</i></b>
Protocol Droid
<i>Me (Unhit)</i>

Unhit
Jul 6, 2002, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by SoulFirE
Well, so far you've only rewrote episode one and two :p
I can't wait for the real story to begiiin!


I did not :p. DM never appeared, no invasion at Naboo etc...
But the story of Episode I was important for to "discover" Anakin.


Oops, thanks for the hint, Unknown. I fixed.

Wild Angel
Jul 6, 2002, 12:59 AM
Heey! Add meee! *looks cute* Padmé? *tilts her head*

`Wildie (geeze, it's been a very long time since I've posted here)

Unhit
Jul 6, 2002, 01:02 AM
OK. Fine.
*thinks if he should play Anakin now*

Well, Defalcon, my Padawan. Praise this day n.n!

defalcon
Jul 6, 2002, 01:47 AM
I'm Anakin, woohoo! :D

Rage
Jul 6, 2002, 11:14 PM
Count me in!

Fawriel
Jul 7, 2002, 12:48 AM
Too late I'd say!}>