The Future Jazz

[Blade Nightflame]

I am currently working on a newer episode
The Future Jazz
The Story is
After the destruction of Devan's latest SpaceShip it began colliding towards Earth! Jazz had to stop it but the engines were indestructible so he had to not only to destroy the engines but the ship aswell he had to destroy the Eclispe Reactor but the reactor had a Really Strong Shield and Jazz found out that the Eclispe Reactor was powerd by the Ultimate Emerald,Jazz tried to destroy the ship but it was too late the Ship was near the Earth
Jazz escaped the ship and accendentily got inside a Time Machine and got transported 3000 years into the future,That's when the Earth exploded then it got revived in 3000 years into the future and the ruler was,Me! Jazz had to travel back in time destroy the ship before it collidided and destroy Devan once and for all!

[Stijn]

Sounds OK. I advise you to use more commas/dots though.

[Tik]

Or more English.

[Fawriel]

But it's not a bad story but I don't really like it but that doesn't matter but maybe not.

Sorry. :D

[4I Falcon]

Originally posted by Master Cheater
...then it got revived in 3000 years into the future and the ruler was,Me!

Does Jazz get to kill you too? If so, I'd play that episode every day.

Your lack of punctuation makes my brain hurt.

[Blade Nightflame]

Hey! It's not funny! He doesn't need to kill me.......
I just wonder around the planet,Just wait until the Dreams Forever Tileset is finished then i can be seen
More Sonic Animations,Knuckles's,And Tails's
Explosions,The Master Emerald and the Ultimate Emerald the Air Ship and others

[Hare]

You guys are mean.

[mikeejimbo]

I wanted to download that, but when I did I got that annoying "Cannot find level or tileset" message. I always get that when a custom tileset is used, even though I have it in the proper folder. Oh well, it sounds kind of interesting.

[Blade Nightflame]

Sorry but it's not finished yet
I only finished the 1 level now i gotta continue the level 2
Level 1: Devan Ship 3000
Level 2 incomplete: Hyper Hill Zone Act 1
Level 3 never made: Hyper Hill Zone Act 2
Level 4 the same: Wacky Workbench
Level 5 the same: Sky City
Level 6 the same: Mecha Madness
Level 7 the same: Space Travel
Level 8 the same: Tomator's Ship?
Level 9 the same: Tomator's Planet
Level 10 the same: Inferno
Level 11 the same: Heaven

There's more!

[Fawriel]

Originally posted by Master Cheater
Just wait until the Dreams Forever Tileset is finished then i can be seen

That is gonna be one scaaaaaaary level....:eek:

....I have to agree with Hare..... but........... IT'S STRONGER THAN ME!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<

[Blade Nightflame]

Originally posted by Piccolo
That is gonna be one scaaaaaaary level....:eek:

IT'S STRONGER THAN ME!!!!!!!!!!!! >_<

*a question mark appears on MC's head*
Right.................................So the ship in the Space Travel level is Z Senex Tima the most advanced spaceship to ever exist beyond humans or anyone's dreams and
Piccolo what you mean by that stronger than me thing?

[Fawriel]

That I have to make fun of you only because you're sorta annoying. How unfair of me. Xb


*shifty eyes*...........*pokes MC off whatever he was standing on*

Wasn't me! *points at Radium*

[Blade Nightflame]

-_-

Let's just hope Radium beats you
Don't move i wanna see the hurt parts and the battle
Ohh and this can also be offtopic and you can post it here

[4I Falcon]

Originally posted by Master Cheater
*a question mark appears on MC's head*
So the ship in the Space Travel level is Z Senex Tima the most advanced spaceship to ever exist beyond humans or anyone's dreams

*shakes head in pity*

*shoots Master Cheater in the face*