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Hare
Aug 3, 2003, 09:23 PM
I made a comic that shows off Toca's personality. :) I don't think it is very funny, but it is nice. It has great expressions. :)

http://groups.msn.com/purrhead/comics.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=215

Hare
Aug 4, 2003, 02:43 AM
I'm a bit uneasy about inking the comic because there's detail in the sketchyness that may be lost in the inking.

Sketchyness...

http://groups.msn.com/purrhead/shawnsartiii.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=217

Captain Spam
Aug 4, 2003, 04:11 AM
Heh... sketchyness is my friend, as I'm certain you're aware if you visit <a href="http://dementia.keenspace.com">my webcomic</a>. :-) Though I tend to employ a different sort of sketchyness, I think I can say that inqing your pics wouldn't hurt them at all. Just use a thin pen to make it happen. In fact, with lines like you have in the comic, it might add something to it if you keep both the ink and the sketchy pencil.

The second one, though... that comes from a GroupBoard or similar impliment of destruction, right? I'd say smooth that one out a bit. Pencil sketchyness looks better than computer scketchyness, I reckon...

But anyhoo, good comic for a start. Nifty attention to detail for five panels. Just remember, vector objects (or Bezier paths in GIMP) are your friend for word balloons. :-)

Radium
Aug 4, 2003, 04:31 AM
Great comic. I'll remember that "Oh my bob it's a plate!"
Sketchyness...
As Velk would never actually say but we all know she thinks it: Blur can solve all your problems =P.

acid
Aug 4, 2003, 08:47 AM
:lol:

Whee, Toca's cute ^_^

Fawriel
Aug 4, 2003, 09:48 AM
Heeey, I like it. ^^
It's funny, too... not the LOL OMG ROFLOLOLOL kind of funny, but funny. ^_~

And the expressions are really cute! ^-^