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Wild Angel
Sep 27, 2003, 12:56 AM
Title inspired by a Metallica song. Feelings inspired by a guy.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/3200076/

I'll miss him.

`Wildie

Radium
Sep 27, 2003, 06:15 AM
Looks quite nice. I think something's wrong with her eye, though... maybe it's her lower eyelid. I dunno, I just don't think it looks quite right.

And I notice all the comments left by Deviantart people are stuff like "Omb i lub it", "praise!", or "I love this, this, this, and this!". Such usless allies you people select.

Kaz
Sep 27, 2003, 08:33 AM
Her eye lacks a bit of depth. THe nose blends a bit too much with the face, but that cannot be noticed on the smaller version. The Pupil (or is it iris?) need detail to keep from looking flat. The other side of the face looks like it'll turn out... wierd, but it might just be an illusion. It sort of looks like the nose is tilting to be noticed that side.

Yeah, higher grade of art, higher grade of criticism. Of course there's that voice in my head that says you shouldn't be judged by something you suppousedly put your soul into or didn't want anything to have to do with in the first place, I'll ignore that though becuase I don't want to say "OMG WONDERFUL LOL PERFECT!"

Coppertop
Sep 27, 2003, 08:48 AM
It's better than anything I could even attempt doing.