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DBoyWheeler
Nov 25, 2003, 12:50 PM
I keep this separate to keep from getting all mixed in the "Everyone's characters" thread.

Name: Lord Iguanus of Noctera
Species: Iguana (duh!)
Sex: Male
Age: Unknown
Home Planet: Noctera. So called because a dark magic keeps the planet in perpetual darkness.

Specialty: Various dark magics

He revived Devan Shell and Shell now is Iguanus' lackey (or one of the lackeys). He causes new trouble in an idea I'm thinking of. If anyone wants to do a fanfiction, fangame, or whatever, email me and I'll give you some ideas. Just remember to mention me in something like "idea by". Thanks.

Risp_old
Nov 25, 2003, 12:56 PM
Err... why? People have posted the profiles of bad guys in the everyone's characters thread before. Just because it is a villain dosn't mean it isn't a character. Or did you make the thing seperate for a different reason?

Coppertop
Nov 25, 2003, 12:58 PM
Ah. The trick is, now make a story about him.

If you need joiners for it, feel free to use any of the ones I've posted =D

DBoyWheeler
Nov 25, 2003, 01:54 PM
Well, I have some ideas... but no real big story just yet (I mostly write Sonic fanfics, and have yet to make a Jazz fic).

How about a short story of how Iguanus revives Devan:
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In the dark planet of Noctera lived an evil iguana sorcerer. He was dressed in a dark druid robe, and had knowledge to various dark magics. His name was Iguanus.

One day, he was meditating in his personal chambers, when he sensed an evil beings death. This being was not as evil as Iguanus, but came close. Iguanus had sensed the death of Devan Shell, enemy of Jazz Jackrabbit. "This 'Devan Shell' can be a perfect ally to my cause," thought Iguanus, as he prepared to make a spell to bring him back to the mortal plane.

In his ritual chamber, Iguanus stood within his magic symbol and chanted an arcane chant. Soon, the symbol glowed, and the spirit of Devan Shell appeared, standing trance-like before his summoner. Soon, flesh gathered around the spirit, and air entered his lungs, and a new pair of spectacles appeared on the turtle's nose. "Eh?" Devan said in shock. "I LIVE AGAIN!!" "Yes," said Iguanus. Devan bowed before the one who brought about his rebirth and said, "I thank you for bringing me back, sir. As a token of thanks, I will pledge my loyalty to you!"

"Excellent!" laughed Iguanus. "Now, let us gather allies and prepare a new attack on the universe. Soon, all will know the power of Iguanus! Ha, ha, ha..."

Violet CLM
Nov 25, 2003, 02:54 PM
I really can't see Devan saying "Oh, you brought me back to life, I will do anything you say". He strikes me more as the "Nice empire, I think I'll take it" type.

Risp_old
Nov 25, 2003, 03:07 PM
Well, if you have the power to bring someone back to life I would think you would have the power to influence their actions. I mean, bringing someone back from the dead without even their corpse must be a lot harder than mind control.

Radium
Nov 25, 2003, 03:17 PM
I mean, bringing someone back from the dead without even their corpse must be a lot harder than mind control.
Mind control is easy and don't make me prove it using your worthless carcass, human mortal.

DBoyWheeler
Nov 25, 2003, 03:42 PM
What happened to the Lori smiley?

Strato
Nov 25, 2003, 03:47 PM
It died ;(

DBoyWheeler
Nov 25, 2003, 04:33 PM
I made an outline for the idea of Jazz's first major battle with Iguanus, in fangame format. Anyone who wishes to share some input, please do.

Prolog:
-King Earlong (Eva's father) faces a shadowy enemy, but loses and dies.
-At a party at the castle, Devan and Zoonik crash the party and introduce Iguanus (who had killed the king)
-A few days later, the Queen (Eva's mother) dies from a spell cast by Iguanus. Jazz prepares to fight. Spaz and Lori protect the palace in Jazz's absence.

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Episode 1: The Hunt Begins

Cutscene: Jazz sees some of Devan and Iguanus' troops invading Carrotus and goes to intercept them.

World 1, Level 1: Seeds of Battle
Setting: Carrotus

World 1, Level 2: The Root of the Problem
Setting: Carrotus

World 2, Level 1: No Mountain High Enough
Setting: Mountain

World 2, Level 2: Rock and Roll
Setting: Mountain

World 3, Level 1: Tempting Temple
Setting: Temple Ruins

World 3, Level 2: Sinister Sanctuary
Setting: Temple Ruins
Boss: Temple Guardian (living statue)

Cutscene: Jazz pursues Iguanus to other worlds. Spaz comforts the grieving Eva, and Lori gets the Carrotonian Guards prepared for a possible invasion.
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Episode 2: Jungle Journey

Cutscene: Jazz lands on Jungrock, one of the planets from Jazz Jackrabbit 1.

World 1, Level 1: De-Vine Inspiration
Setting: Jungrock jungle

World 1, Level 2: Trouble in the Tropics
Setting: Jungrock jungle

World 2, Level 1: Crystal Clear
Setting: Crystal mine

World 2, Level 2: Precious Stone
Setting: Crystal mine

World 3, Level 1: Skeletons in the Closet
Setting: Burial grounds

World 3, Level 2: Knee Deep in the Dead
Setting: Crypt
Boss: Lizard mummy

Cutscene: Jazz enters into another warp to chase down Iguanus. Meanwhile, Devan listens to Iguanus' plans for the attack on Carrotus.
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Episode 3: Cold Reception

Cutscene: Jazz arrives on Nippius, yet another planet from Jazz Jackrabbit 1.

World 1, Level 1: Nippius in the Bud
Setting: Nippius surface

World 1, Level 2: Snowshoe Hare
Setting: Nippius surface

World 2, Level 1: Nice Ice
Setting: Ice cavern

World 2, Level 2: Slippin' and Slidin'
Setting: Ice cavern

World 3, Level 1: Frigid Air
Setting: Airship

World 3, Level 2: Blizzard Bunnies
Setting: Airship
Boss: Ice Golem

Cutscene: Jazz receives a distress signal from Deserto (yet another Jazz Jackrabbit 1 planet) and flies there. Meanwhile, Iguanus sends Devan and some monsters to attack Carrotus. Spaz and Lori prepare for the attack.
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Episode 4: Shifting Sands

Cutscene: Jazz's ship is shot down, and Jazz is stuck on Deserto.

World 1, Level 1: Deserto Just Desserts
Setting: Deserto surface

World 1, Level 2: Blazing Dunes
Setting: Deserto surface

World 2, Level 1: Kick the Canyon
Setting: Canyon

World 2, Level 2: Winding River
Setting: Canyon

World 3, Level 1: A Hair Cata-Comb
Setting: Catacomb

World 3, Level 2: Maze Craze
Setting: Catacomb
Boss: Minotaur

Cutscene: Jazz finds the source of the distress signal and realizes it was all a diversion. Finding an old teleporter that still works, he gets it to teleport to a place near Carrotus.
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Episode 5: Tragedy

Cutscene: Jazz lands on the space station on Radishia, a moon of Carrotus.

World 1, Level 1: Radishia Slaw
Setting: Radishia station

World 1, Level 2: The Road Home
Setting: Radishia station

Cutscene: Jazz teleports to a Carrotus in ruins! A wounded Spaz arrives and begs Jazz to return to the palace; Lori needs help!

World 2, Level 1: Carrotus Calamity
Setting: Ruined Carrotus surface

World 2, Level 2: Lagomorph Lament
Setting: Ruined Carrotus surface

World 3, Level 1: What's Left of Home
Setting: Carrotus Palace Ruins

World 3, Level 2: Picking Up the Pieces
Setting: Carrotus Palace Ruins
Boss: Devan (in a walker)

Cutscene: Lori regains consciousness as Devan retreats. She tells Jazz of the portal to Noctera and that Iguanus kidnapped Eva, and Jazz goes into the portal.
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Episode 6: Final Justice

Cutscene: Jazz arrives in the Astral Plane, and prepares his assault on Noctera

World 1, Level 1: Astral Anomaly
Setting: Astral Plane

World 1, Level 2: Hyperspace Chase
Setting: Astral Plane

World 2, Level 1: Touchdown on Noctera
Setting: Noctera surface

World 2, Level 2: Shades of the Future
Setting: Noctera surface

World 3, Level 1: Castle of the Night
Setting: Iguanus' castle

World 3, Level 2: Final Showdown
Setting: Iguanus' castle
Boss 1: Iguanus Statue
Boss 2: Iguanus
Boss 3: Iguanus' spirit

After battle: Jazz saves Eva, but Iguanus vows to return as soon as he finds another body.
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Ending:
-Eva pays her last respects to her departed parents.
-Jazz and Eva become the new king and queen of Carrotus.
-A few months later, Jazz and Eva become parents for the first time.

Fawriel
Nov 26, 2003, 02:49 AM
What you're talking about sounds a lot more like a levelpack than a War Tavern story to me...

DBoyWheeler
Nov 26, 2003, 03:37 AM
What you're talking about sounds a lot more like a levelpack than a War Tavern story to me...

Well, if I ever find a way to make it into a story, I'll do so.

Coppertop
Nov 26, 2003, 05:44 AM
Good.

Ducky
Nov 27, 2003, 10:36 AM
Um, this thread seems a little useless, guys. The Characters thread is there for characters. If you're going to write a story in this thread, please do, but don't use it for idle comments.