Fabella Vitae character References

[Fawriel]

Here it is.

In this thread, I will present the ten main characters of the story I have been working on for over one and a half years now, counting...


<b>Fabella Vita</b>, <b>the story of life.</b>


The characters will be presented in antichronological order, and after every character description, a reference picture of their Soul Ego will follow.

It starts with...

Yumaldeus Moragape, he incarnation of evil. (http://www.deviantart.com/view/4135825/)
(Click if you want to see the picture. It may take very long to load. )


Biography:
Born as the child of a noble couple who owned vast lands near So'elesz City, with brown fur and white hair. He was extremely gifted mentally just as physically.
He was heavily spoilt as a child by his parents. His education lead to him thinking in very black and white ways: The most powerful ones survive, the weak die.
He started research on plastic surgery and DNA study at the age of 15.
The young Yumaldeus was not satisfied with his appearance and planned to change it himself.
At the age of 19, he discovered scrolls and books about history before the year 0.
Learning that the "devil from heaven" Devin, who has, almost 2000 years ago, killed all evil men on the planet, appeared in the country he lived in, he became sure, that his people was chosen to reign over the planet.
At the age of 20, his fur has turned white, his skin was genetically mixed with that of a Techin (a mysterious magical animal ), his hair has been replace by the golden fur of the legendary Golden Wuschel, and so did the rest of his body change.
At the age of 24, he has already built an industrial empire, manufacturing implants (such as the Vileq device ) and other machines, and beside that, was very active in the field of genetic manipulation.
A special unit of scientists working for Mr. Moragape secretly produced weapons, and manipulated the DNA of all kinds of creatures, even humans.
At that point, Yumaldeus Moragape, in his ill mind, had already created a horrible plan: to become the leader of his country, then conquer the rest of the world in a giant war.
That he wanted to achieve with the help of his financial secretary, Mr. Ammon, who was to blackmail and manipulate the people in charge of other countries into betraying each other, and the chief Scientist, Mr. Nimmermehr, who created biological weapons and genetically perfectionated soldiers to secretly sell to the allied countries.
A short time later, at the age of 25, a special event took place in his life.
The headquarters of his firm were invaded by a lizard-woman called Typhona, who was, just as Devin long ago, created by the Magical Spirits who dwell inside earth, the Sirray, to kill Yumaldeus.
After a long and horrible battle, she was miserably defeated. But, before Mr. Moragape could finally kill her, she told him about her origin... and yet another diabolic plan was made in his brain...
He locked her up in his basement, wher he raped her until she gave birth to a baby...
It was a green weasel, which was called " Fawriel".
Afterwards, she was killed, her DNA forged with that of Yumaldeus.
Planning to recrute his son to a powerful soldier, or to absorb his magical powers inherited by his mother himself, he built a mining town to a personal prison for Fawriel, where he was constantly being observed, never allowed to leave.

The story begins 14 years later. Yumaldeus has already, at the age of 41, taken control of his country as well as others.
His plan is about to succeed.

[Risp_old]

It might just be the style, but he looks like his mouth is on his right cheek.

[Radium]

It might just be the style, but he looks like his mouth is on his right cheek.
Every evil person needs a mutation.

[Fawriel]

Let me guess. About 0.0% of you read the description, which this is mostly about, right? >_>

[Disguise]

FAW wanted this in the war tavern, so OFF TO THE WAR TAVERN IT GOES!

The thread is about the character descriptions, so uhhhhh...character description like conversation? It's the least to ask for :p

[Fawriel]

Fishy, Fishy, he's our miss, if his butt isn't special, nobody's is!

[Coppertop]

FAWriel! *hugs*
Pretty well developed character ... people tend to avoid making really good bad guys, but you've done an excellent job. Though the father-son thing tends to be a bit over-used ... "Faw, I am your father!"
Good job, overall.

[Fawriel]

Thanks.

Well, yeah, it occured to me that it sounds like the Star Wars thing. XP
But it has symbolic meaning, too.
Typhona = nature
Yumaldeus = man
Man rapes nature.

And the dreamer Faw is a mixture of them both.

[Coppertop]

I see. I take it Fawriel knows that Yumaldeus is his dad.

[Fawriel]

Nope, he won't even know that guy existed until the end of the First Act.
Bea and Didi take care of him in that prison city, acting as his parents.

[Coppertop]

Okay, that IS like SW.

[Fawriel]

Awwwwwwwww... it's a COINCIDENCE! ;_;
That's like saying "Oy, that story features a female fighter, yo copied from Xena!". *pouts*

[Radium]

that story features a female fighter
The story has a female fighter? You copied Xena!!

I like to think up entirely original ideas. ATWFF would've been so original if I had finished it.

[Fawriel]

You CANNOT possibly think up something totally original. Everything has been done before!
Except if you want the hero to be a pudding who has to save the royal lawnmower from the almost-evil packrat-Clearasile pads.

[Radium]

You just gave yourself the starting to an entirely original story!

[Ninja]

Fawriel,

First of all, YOUR STORY IS FLIPPING US OFF.

Second, you will NEVER be a Jesus Jumper.

[Radium]

*cough* okay, let's get down to crits'.
Born as the child of a noble couple who owned vast lands near So'elesz City, with brown fur and white hair. He was extremely gifted mentally just as physically.
Generally people are described by more than their hair color.
He was heavily spoilt as a child by his parents. His education lead to him thinking in very black and white ways: The most powerful ones survive, the weak die.
He started research on plastic surgery and DNA study at the age of 15.
He's a Radium rip-off.
The young Yumaldeus was not satisfied with his appearance and planned to change it himself.
At the age of 19, he discovered scrolls and books about history before the year 0.
Learning that the "devil from heaven" Devin, who has, almost 2000 years ago, killed all evil men on the planet, appeared in the country he lived in, he became sure, that his people was chosen to reign over the planet.
Not sure how this fits into anything else you say.
At the age of 20, his fur has turned white, his skin was genetically mixed with that of a Techin (a mysterious magical animal ), his hair has been replace by the golden fur of the legendary Golden Wuschel, and so did the rest of his body change.
At the age of 24, he has already built an industrial empire, manufacturing implants (such as the Vileq device ) and other machines, and beside that, was very active in the field of genetic manipulation.
His previous color scheme was better. Downgraded D=.
A special unit of scientists working for Mr. Moragape secretly produced weapons, and manipulated the DNA of all kinds of creatures, even humans.
At that point, Yumaldeus Moragape, in his ill mind, had already created a horrible plan: to become the leader of his country, then conquer the rest of the world in a giant war.
That he wanted to achieve with the help of his financial secretary, Mr. Ammon, who was to blackmail and manipulate the people in charge of other countries into betraying each other, and the chief Scientist, Mr. Nimmermehr, who created biological weapons and genetically perfectionated soldiers to secretly sell to the allied countries.
Ooooh, he's good. *takes notes*
A short time later, at the age of 25, a special event took place in his life.
The headquarters of his firm were invaded by a lizard-woman called Typhona, who was, just as Devin long ago, created by the Magical Spirits who dwell inside earth, the Sirray, to kill Yumaldeus.
Assassinations are such a special event. "Important" may work better here.
After a long and horrible battle, she was miserably defeated. But, before Mr. Moragape could finally kill her, she told him about her origin... and yet another diabolic plan was made in his brain...
Why do people ALWAYS tell their life story to the badguy before they die?
he raped her until she gave birth to a baby...
It would make so much more sense if he only raped her until she was pregnant.
It was a green weasel, which was called " Fawriel".
I take it this makes him "lukewarm blooded".
Afterwards, she was killed, her DNA forged with that of Yumaldeus.
Planning to recrute his son to a powerful soldier, or to absorb his magical powers inherited by his mother himself, he built a mining town to a personal prison for Fawriel, where he was constantly being observed, never allowed to leave.
<i>And then the evil witch sent the princess to the attic...</i>
The story begins 14 years later. Yumaldeus has already, at the age of 41, taken control of his country as well as others.
His plan is about to succeed.
... together, the battle and pregnancy lasted two years?

[Fawriel]

I don't know whether to hate you or to laugh at you.

[Radium]

I was looking forward to your halfhearted excuses, actually.

[Fawriel]

I don't have to give excuses. What you're saying is simple bullcrap. Criticising my story is not an option, Rad. =P

[Radium]

I'd at least want to know why she was pregnant for two years.

[Fawriel]

Apparently because of a grammatical error on my side.

[Radium]

Apparently because of a grammatical error on my side.
Mathematical, actually. Now explain the warm/cold blooded thing.

[Fawriel]

Mathematical then. Sounds more alike me anyways.
And there is no problem about the blood. Since all anthros are human, and thus their anatomy and other things are mostly the same.

[Radium]

Lizardpeople are warm blooded? So they're kind of like bald green kangaroos, right?

[Fawriel]

Hahaharoflololol omg rad u r so funny ;--))))))))))))))

If you got any SERIOUS questions, I'll be glad to prove you that this here story lacks NOTHING, not even logic.

[Radium]

All the questions were serious. First of all, how do a reptile and mammal reproduce, and second, why was she pregnant for two years?

[Fawriel]

First was answered, second was answered. Will you be quiet now? <i>Please?</i>

[Radium]

Will you be quiet now? <i>Please?</i>
If you don't want criticism, don't make anything. No matter what you create, you'll get criticism. Not everyone in this world is a hug-happy deviantzombie, and the MINUTE you release something to the <i>real</i> public, you will be hit with so much hard criticism you'll break down to tears. <i>Most</i> people'd break down to tears, you'd probably kill yourself.
Don't think of criticism as a series of insults, think of it as a "proofread". Do you think famous authors write a book, send it in, and make millions? No! If you've ever seen a proofread book, you'll wonder how the editor could afford that much ink. Does the author say "screw you" and release the book anyway? No! They cut, copy, and paste until the book is the epitome of perfection! I've seen novels get turned into <i>children's books</i> during the editing process, so don't expect it to EVER be easy. But the authors know that they either listen to the editor's criticism, or hear the same thing from thousands of angry readers. There's a VERY large line between completed and completed <i>right</i>. Cruel criticism WON'T go away. Kind criticism is always incomplete criticism.
It's a cruel world. Learn how to twist it around your finger, or get twisted.

[Fawriel]

I won't even read that. My mood is too good.
Don't think I'm a stupid little child that thinks he's a little Superman who does something and it's perfect at once.
It's not my fault you're too blind to see that.
I can very well see what is wrong with the things I do myself, thankyouverymuch.
And no one will care that a lizard and a weasel can't mate in real life, since this is FANTASY, and ALSO, THEY. ARE. HUMAN!. CREATURES! AND THUS HAVE THE FRIKKIN SAME ANATOMY AS WELL AS ORGANS AND ALL THAT! D'OH!
If you'd just once believe me that my "hlaf-hearted excuses" are actually true...

[Radium]

I won't even read that. My mood is too good.
I'll post it again, only in bold this time.
<b>If you don't want criticism, don't make anything. No matter what you create, you'll get criticism. Not everyone in this world is a hug-happy deviantzombie, and the MINUTE you release something to the real public, you will be hit with so much hard criticism you'll break down to tears. Most people'd break down to tears, you'd probably kill yourself.
Don't think of criticism as a series of insults, think of it as a "proofread". Do you think famous authors write a book, send it in, and make millions? No! If you've ever seen a proofread book, you'll wonder how the editor could afford that much ink. Does the author say "screw you" and release the book anyway? No! They cut, copy, and paste until the book is the epitome of perfection! I've seen novels get turned into children's books during the editing process, so don't expect it to EVER be easy. But the authors know that they either listen to the editor's criticism, or hear the same thing from thousands of angry readers. There's a VERY large line between completed and completed right. Cruel criticism WON'T go away. Kind criticism is always incomplete criticism.
It's a cruel world. Learn how to twist it around your finger, or get twisted.</b>
Don't think I'm a stupid little child that thinks he's a little Superman who does something and it's perfect at once. It's not my fault you're too blind to see that.
If you were perfect, I wouldn't criticize you. And blind? I may not be able to see, but you're seeing things that aren't there.
I can very well see what is wrong with the things I do myself, thankyouverymuch.
EVERYBODY thinks this at first. Eventually you'll have to face the cold hard truth that you can't validly criticize yourself.
And no one will care that a lizard and a weasel can't mate in real life, since this is FANTASY, and ALSO, THEY. ARE. HUMAN!. CREATURES! AND THUS HAVE THE FRIKKIN SAME ANATOMY AS WELL AS ORGANS AND ALL THAT! D'OH!
That's why I was asking what made her a "lizard" if she's not a reptile.
If you'd just once believe me that my "hlaf-hearted excuses" are actually true...
...then I wouldn't be a very good critic, would I?

[4I Falcon]

Not the best sort of argument to read when I'm about to kill someone already...

[Strato]

Rather interesting of a read.

[VelKa]

Radium should consider doing professional editing/proofreading. He could help change the very destiny of the world. And I'm not even being sarcastic. ;-P


~morganeverett

[Radium]

Radium should consider doing professional editing/proofreading. He could help change the very destiny of the world.
Or weapons testing; that's always fun.

[Risp_old]

Wait, weapons testing as a target or as a user?

[VelKa]

Or weapons testing; that's always fun.
Exactly. Do weapons testing, too. If you ever need funding, I can rob the nearby bank for you.


~morganeverett

[Fawriel]

And I still didn't read it. Fun.

If you're such a great critic, why don't you..


..criticise CT? Yeah, she's got to imperfect, too. Tell HER what's wrong with her!

[4I Falcon]

Or me, for that matter. I'm about as far from perfect as anyone's going to get. *beats people with his unkempt ball of hair*

In any case, mexcellent profile-y thing, Fawz. Mmm, villainy is a tasty KILLSTUFF RAWR type thing.

[Radium]

And I still didn't read it. Fun.
I'll post it again, only in bold and underlined this time. And you know there are hundreds of HTML codes to blow here, and I won't stop until you read it and write a valid counterargument.
<b><u>If you don't want criticism, don't make anything. No matter what you create, you'll get criticism. Not everyone in this world is a hug-happy deviantzombie, and the MINUTE you release something to the real public, you will be hit with so much hard criticism you'll break down to tears. Most people'd break down to tears, you'd probably kill yourself.
Don't think of criticism as a series of insults, think of it as a "proofread". Do you think famous authors write a book, send it in, and make millions? No! If you've ever seen a proofread book, you'll wonder how the editor could afford that much ink. Does the author say "screw you" and release the book anyway? No! They cut, copy, and paste until the book is the epitome of perfection! I've seen novels get turned into children's books during the editing process, so don't expect it to EVER be easy. But the authors know that they either listen to the editor's criticism, or hear the same thing from thousands of angry readers. There's a VERY large line between completed and completed right. Cruel criticism WON'T go away. Kind criticism is always incomplete criticism.
It's a cruel world. Learn how to twist it around your finger, or get twisted.</u></b>
If you're such a great critic, why don't you..
..criticise CT? Yeah, she's got to imperfect, too. Tell HER what's wrong with her!
Okay, I'll do that from now on. That was easy, wasn't it?

@4I: Buzzcut. Now silence.

[Fawriel]

Well, I'm listening.

Not to the bold, underlined, (insert future mutilations here ) text, anyways.

[Radium]

Well, I'm listening.

Not to the bold, underlined, (insert future mutilations here ) text, anyways.

It's perfectly normal now. Name your excuse.


If you don't want criticism, don't make anything. No matter what you create, you'll get criticism. Not everyone in this world is a hug-happy deviantzombie, and the MINUTE you release something to the real public, you will be hit with so much hard criticism you'll break down to tears. Most people'd break down to tears, you'd probably kill yourself.
Don't think of criticism as a series of insults, think of it as a "proofread". Do you think famous authors write a book, send it in, and make millions? No! If you've ever seen a proofread book, you'll wonder how the editor could afford that much ink. Does the author say "screw you" and release the book anyway? No! They cut, copy, and paste until the book is the epitome of perfection! I've seen novels get turned into children's books during the editing process, so don't expect it to EVER be easy. But the authors know that they either listen to the editor's criticism, or hear the same thing from thousands of angry readers. There's a VERY large line between completed and completed right. Cruel criticism WON'T go away. Kind criticism is always incomplete criticism.
It's a cruel world. Learn how to twist it around your finger, or get twisted.

[Fawriel]

I didn't see it cos I was waiting for italics?

My page. =3

[Radium]

You're running out of excuses. You can't hide forever.

[Fawriel]

*sigh*
Jeez.

If you want me to listen to you so badly, why don't you try listening to ME for a change?
I'm not the dumb little child you apparently think I am.
I have made my own experiences with the world, I know it is cruel, better than you, I can tell you that for sure.
I know what I am doing, okay?

I appreciate criticism on my drawings since I know that they still need some improvement... AS LONG as the criticism is GOOD criticism.
"She looks like Q-Bert." is definitely not what I'd call constructive.
If you want me to, I can show you how well I can criticize myself and show you what I mean.
I'm seriously tired of all this arguing, man. >_>

[Radium]

If you want me to listen to you so badly, why don't you try listening to ME for a change?
I do. Your statements simply carry no proof or truth.
I'm not the dumb little child you apparently think I am.
You're one year older than me, about a foot taller than me, and weigh over 20 lbs more than me. You aren't a little child, just dumb.
I have made my own experiences with the world, I know it is cruel, better than you, I can tell you that for sure.
You missed the point there.
I know what I am doing, okay?
Doesn't seem to be much at all.
I appreciate criticism on my drawings since I know that they still need some improvement... AS LONG as the criticism is GOOD criticism.
"She looks like Q-Bert." is definitely not what I'd call constructive.
She did look like Q-Bert. I would say "She looks like Q-Bert and you can fix this by", but I was assuming you were able to figure <i>some</i> things out on your own. I was wrong.
If you want me to, I can show you how well I can criticize myself and show you what I mean.
Shoot.
I'm seriously tired of all this arguing, man. >_>
It's only an argument when one or more people aren't thinking or listening. Otherwise it's a debate.

[Fawriel]

I expected you to react childish like this. Fine, if you won't listen...

[Radium]

I expected you to react childish like this. Fine, if you won't listen...
If I would be more mature ignoring your statements, answering incompletly, and sticking to an opinion with no evidence to back it up, by all means I'll do it.
Let me try being mature:

I am not eight years old. You're all better than me. I know what I'm doing even though I'm accomplising nothing. I have a good reason but I won't say it. Maybe it isn't real. Plz stop depressing me, I'm emotional monday through sunday.

[Ducky]

Okay, you guys really need to stop. Radium, this is a warning for you, and Faw, I'm going to have to tell you that you were flaming back, so please refrain.
If this goes on I'm going to close the thread.

[4I Falcon]

Ducky beat me to it.

EDIT: And in a much more sophisticated fashion, with less swear words, too. Envy.

[Radium]

Ach, sorry; got carried away again.

[Ninja]

Yay, Ducky. =)

[Strato]

Oooh, it's over. ;(

[Paul]

let me preface this by saying I am not trying to degrade your story in any way, but only to raise a grammatical question about the title.

ok, ignore the following if the title of your story is intended to be italian (a language I am wholly unfamiliar with), or some language other than latin. But if it's latin, bear with me because it's time to enter:

LATIN PEDANT MODE! (all true latin students posess the ability to transform into a pedant at will. kind of magical, if you ask me)

--initiating latin pedant mode--
I hate to nitpick, but if you were going for latin in your title (fabella vita /ae--you seem to change it in the topic and the title--) you're close but not quite there. the latin for tale/fable/etc is Fabula -ae, and what you've got is a bit of a distortion of the diminuitive form (i.e., "little tale"), the proper identity of which I'm not sure of (fabula is not one of those words you often see in the diminuitive like that). Whatever the diminuitive is, though, I'm thinking there isn't an e in there.

But I don't actually think you wanted the dimunitive, seeing as you translate your title as the story of life, or something like that. What that would actually be is "Fabula Vitae." You had the Vitae correct all the way through; well done on that front. You'd be amazed (well, maybe I'm the only one who is) at the awful latin distortions that go on in the harsh, harsh world of non-latin students out there.
--exiting latin pedant mode--

well that was fun. thus ends my single post for the month--and, I think, my second post ever in the war tavern. see you in january.

[Coppertop]

THANK you, Duckah.

[Fawriel]

I'm still saying I was just defending myself...
I wasn't the one calling the other dumb.... but whatever. *sigh*

Thanks for the correction, Paul! That mistake would have killed me if I had kept it...

[4I Falcon]

Indeed. Latin will one day be the death of us all.