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acid

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Oct 15, 2003, 02:14 PM
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Jeez, this chapter is giving me lots of mixed feelings...

At first, it was humorous, mainly from me going with Foo. Unfortunately, you didn't tell us what happened with anyone but Jack and Blaze. >_<

The moving floor part was confusing, and I want to see where it figures into the satellite. Also, how come everyone was the same distance from the reactors if one was in the center, and the rest were in the arms?

And, at the end, poor Blaze =(
However, I'm sure that Jack will dismantle the satellite piece by piece, and do the same to Buster in revenge.

And, I need to write another chapter of T4W, don't I? >_<
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