Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

This level drove me nuts! I’m sorry to have to put it quite that way, but it really is that bad. Music was fine,but it didn’t fit with the level. The concept was quite intriguing, but poorly done. The ship was ugly. The level was practically bare. How long did you take to build this?
So, your concept was great,you just didn’t excecute it too well. Why don’t you next time put a little more interesting stuff in your level? It’ll improve it, trust me. The level was quite small, I got very bored very fast. The foreground ship only serves to frustrate, as it cuts off a major part of your view, and prevents you from accurately targeting opponents with your blaster.
So next time around, try making it a bit more interesting. Ditch the ship, or at least revamp the concept. You’re good at this. I can tell. Just keep plugging away at it, and watch what happens. No dl recommendation, not yet. Give him a chance to fix this up first.