You know, I first started reading this when it was started. I didn't like it very much then so I abandoned it. (Wait, there's more) Today, I read how this was being ignored and I decided to give it another chance. The milk of human kindness does something or other. I read it from the begininning, not remembering it very well. It didn't start out all that well. But your writing skills have certainly improved and the last few chaps are quite cool. Nice work, and continue.