I am willing to help. But I need alittle better of the perspective of what you are writing. Post chapter one. I need alittle better of a idea of what you are writing from.



Profile

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Name: Wild Angel



Species: Siegel Angel



Age: 17



Gender: Female



Nickname: Wildie or Wild



Looks: Black leather dress that is cut five inches over the knee. My fur is jet black, but I have hair in between my ears that looks like pure gold strands.



Items I always have : A platinum bladed broad sword with a gold hilt. It has my initials engraved into the blade. "Wild Angel"

I have a wand, which I can do everything and anything with.

A hunting knife with a silver blade. The hilt is a dragon with it's wings spread, and a emerald in it's mouth.



Orphan?: Yes



Why?: My parents where killed when I was just a baby by Devan Shell.



Past: I don't talk about it much, but when I was a baby, my mother died trying to protect me. Devan Shell took me and raised me as a soldier and a fighter. I was then trained to be something of his entertaining slave. I ran away when I was seventeen, or my current age. I carry a velvet covered journal that I write in every now and then. It has my memories of my worst days with Devan Shell. At age fourteen, Devan found out my telepathic powers, and treated me as a mage from then on.



Powers: I can create orbs with my hands. I am telepathic which means I can read peoples minds and memories.



Personality: I am pretty much sweet and loving all of the time. I hate Devan Shell, he is my mortal enemey. I try every chance to kill him. I am serious when needed, and very, very good in battle. I will protect any of my friends, and die for them.



Strength: 9/10



Skills: Running, climbing walls, I use walls to bouce off of *read my story*, swimming, fighting, riding horses, ect...*everything mainly*



Brothers and Sisters: One, GoldBones *but it is up to him to join *



Wot did I miss?