YeS! Something to critisize!
His left arm seems to have two joints, his head is a bit too tall and not wide enough. You need a bit of practice on arm muscles, remember that one muscle (the quadrecep, I think) is one the outer side of the arm, and the Bicep is on top. Sketching something as a stick figure first helps prevent curved limbs, like this left arm. And the web kind of looks like barbed wire... but that would hurt.
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<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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