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Oh boy, flaming! I live for this. I'll make it as nice as possible.
Well, first of all, the face (and the whole thing in general) seems kind of flat and 2D. The right knee is too far forward, and the left leg is too tube shaped. The arms look alright, though. I'd recomend using some form of planing sketch (like breaking it down into basic shapes) to get your dimentions and proportions right. I have a sketch I did of a rabbit somewhere... I'll post it when I find it (everything on my hard drive is kind of stored in one folder).
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<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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