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Radium

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Mar 16, 2003, 04:41 PM
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The first one looks pretty good, but I think the eyes are too close together... not sure. His hips seem very thin, though. I really like the background on the second one, but the wolf looks somewhat like he's in pain, I think his eyes are closed too tight. The third is pretty nice, very cartoony =P. The dragons in the fourth one are very well drawn, but the blue one appears to have broken his neck. Also, on one of them, I think the mouth extends a bit too far back, in general it shouldn't go past the back edge of the eyes... not quite sure about that.

That's all my complaining... for now.
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