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Another EXCITING episode of Radium's Hurtful Critisization!
I'll start at the top and go down. First off, her head seems to be placed a tad too far to the left and isn't alligned with her neck correctly. Her collarbone is still a little too straight across, as far as I know that can only be accomplisged by doing something very painful with your back. Her left arm looks alright, but the right one appears to get thinner at the elbow. And her left hand has appeared to have lost a finger... decide on weather you want 4 or 5. Her waist is too thin and too straight, and her ribcage is quite mispositioned. And about the tail, generally a tail of that shape is more fur than tail, and the bite gash is it makes it look more like one solid mass.
You have to admit, I may be mean but I'm the only one here who gives helpful critiszation =P.
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<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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