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Originally posted by Radium
Another EXCITING episode of Radium's Hurtful Critisization!
I'll start at the top and go down. First off, her head seems to be placed a tad too far to the left and isn't alligned with her neck correctly. Her collarbone is still a little too straight across, as far as I know that can only be accomplisged by doing something very painful with your back. Her left arm looks alright, but the right one appears to get thinner at the elbow. And her left hand has appeared to have lost a finger... decide on weather you want 4 or 5. Her waist is too thin and too straight, and her ribcage is quite mispositioned. And about the tail, generally a tail of that shape is more fur than tail, and the bite gash is it makes it look more like one solid mass.
You have to admit, I may be mean but I'm the only one here who gives helpful critiszation =P.
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Not entirely correct,tho! 
That comment about her fingers was ridiculous! Xb
The small one is HIDDEN BEHIND THE OTHERS of course!Xb
Doh.
Rest is quite okay,tho I think her neck is correctly placed on her head if you consider that she's prolly not sitting straight but lowering her head a little...
Not sure about the tail,either.Hm.
Anyways,thanks for criticism and stuff,altho SOME nice words wouldn't hurt you either!
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