As Batty said, a good first attempt. I'm not sure if it's just your style, but I think you're kind of approaching drawing heads a bit wrong. The neck actually comes from the back of the head, and in the drawings it appears to be coming from the chin. You may have to do that because the characters are kind of "chibish", thou.
If the above dosn't make the slightest bit of sense, this image explains it:
http://www.foxmage.com/Head.png
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