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Grath AR

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May 5, 2003, 07:17 AM
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The first place that Grath went was an old clan base, that of GPW.
There he found that most of the clan had been wiped out in fights with other clans. Only one member remained: Shinyso, also known as 'NinjA'.
He was a robot-rabbit, rescued by the GpW. His attacks are different than those of a normal robot-rabbit, being lightning-based and stealth-like attacks.

As Grath entered the clan base, a rubber chicken promptly flew through the air and stuck itself into the wall next to Grath by its beak. Ninja then popped his head out from a door, and recognized Grath.
'Sorry about that, Grath' said Ninja as he went over and got the rubber chicken back.
'It's okay, Ninja. I'm trying to overthrow Devan and his armies, freeing the armies. Want to join me?' said Grath.
'I don't know. I need to think about it for a bit.' said Ninja.
'Well, I'm heading off towards the mountains for a bit. Catch up if you want to come with me' said Grath.

And so Grath went on his way towards the mountains. As he started to climb, Ninja caught up. 'Wait up, Grath! There are some troops of Robot-Rabbits coming for the largest hiding place!' said Ninja.
'What? Then let's go, Ninja!'
They both ran back towards Under-Carrot, the largest hiding place since Devan made his army.
As they got there, Rabbits were running from the troops of rabbits.
Grath stopped a rabbit with white fur and blonde hair who was wearing blue and white clothes.
'Why are people running? Why don't they fight?'
'Because they are trained, and none of us have trained our magic!' said the rabbit. 'Will you help us in our fight? I'll help you with your training!' 'Why sure, My name's Sherry.' said Sherry. 'Then lets go fight. My name's Grath.'
Sherry pulled a tennis ball from his pocket, and smashed it at the robot rabbits, knocking one's head off.
Grath extended a gun from his arm, and started firing his minigun at the robot rabbits, injuring many.
Ninja pulled out his blade and started slashing.
'Devan's sure making them flimsier now. My construction's pretty sturdy, but I could kick these things apart.' said Grath as his switched to Telekinetics, retracting the gun and flinging a robot-rabbit into another, smashing both.

Then the enemy robot-rabbits pulled machineguns from their backs, firing back.
'Duck!' yelled Grath, and they all dived to the ground as the rabbits shot at them. The robot-rabbits aimed back down at them, and the leader said 'Surrender, or die.
'Time to use this up' Grath said, pulling out a card, putting energy into it, then tosses it forward at the enemy leader's feet. The card burst into flame, and the ground rumbles ominously.
'Okay, Time for us to get away. Ninja, would you use your grappling hook to pull us away?' Grath said. Ninja grabbed both, then tossed the grappling hook and pulled them away. 'Now let's watch the fireworks.' said Grath and they turned and watched the panic-stricken robot-rabbits looking around then suddenly a yellow beam shot up from the ground in the middle of the robot-rabbits, decimating the ranks.
'Now let's rock!' said Grath, extending his gun and firing RF rockets into the reminaing robo-rabbits. Ninja hurled shurikens at the robo-rabbits, and Sherry smashed robo-rabbits with tennis balls until all the robo-rabbits were dead.
'Thanks for helping out there, Sherry. We couldn't have done it without your help.' said Grath. 'I'm currently trying to overthrow Devan. Want to come with?' 'Sure,' said Sherry. 'I'll try to help out.'
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As you can see, I've managed to put a fight scene, and the joining of two people in a single chapter. My chapters are fairly short, but I need Blacksheepie's response before I keep writing, so bug her to if you want more.
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