Hmm, I had a surprisingly good time while reading the sketch document. hehe, I like humor. I bet that one would really be an awesome game, expecially with that wonderful story.
I hate puzzle games though. I bought Klonoa: Land of Dreams, expecting it to be a fun platformer, but it turned out to be a puzzle/platformer, and I didn't like that much at all. I really wish I could have played Klonoa with his cool abilities to fight through a level, and not to use them to solve puzzles. BLECH! More action, and a just a littlle bit of puzzles on the side is what I like  .
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