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Rumbo Rabbit

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May 30, 2001, 11:44 PM
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WOW....didn't think it was so good. Im a blushing rabbit now ....



Heres the next bit....



'Jelze passed through into TIME, was asked to be the next Guardian of TIME from TIME itself nd Jelze said yes, if anything to save Carrotus. As he prepared to eturn to Carrotus to see what he could do, theres another TIME traeller still in question...'



Jelze found himself standing on the border of TIMEs world, with a gun in one hand and a spirit full of TIMEs energy inside him. TIME had told him many things, about the truth of TIME and more of the 'creator'. Jelze now understood what Rumbo had secretly known and was now ready to take Rumbo's place..

'Rumbo...' Jelze said to himself, closing his eyes, remembering what had happened...

'...there appears to be hope....' it was TIMEs voice

'Hope?' Jelze questioned

'...yes....you see.....'

'Is it to do with Rumbo?'

'...yes....he isn't dead...'

'What?'

'...he is very much alive...'

'But how?'

'I can't understand myself but he is, somewhere in TIME...'

'You want me to find him?' Jelze asked, a big smile appeared on his face

'No, you must head to New Carrotus. I want you to find............'



Meanwhile....



Dr Jones was found in another wreckage, this time up in a hilly area above many trees and some villages below. He was also alone like Jazz and Talec. He still had his powers, yet he was as confused as the rest of them.

He looked back and fourth, trying to find his one true love, Lori. He couldn't see her, his eyes became wet. He wanted to see her again. He crouched down. He went to sleep.



--------Sortec, Laman, Vortec, Karman…-------



During the night the village that Dr Jones lie within was attacked, by what were known to be followers of Nebula, Creations, rabbits who posses no powers and have had their minds possesed to follow Nebula.

Dr Jones felt a thud as one of the followers punched him in the chest. He spat out and woke up, seeing four rabbits above him, looking down at him with evil eyes. They began to hit him more. Dr Jones didn't scream, he didn't do anything at first. Then suddenly he got up and started to use his powers to his best....his hand.....morphed into.....A MINIGUN!

The four rabbits began to run as Dr Jones pointed it at them. Suddenly he heard gunfire from behind him. He ducked down, dodging the attacks. He rolled over and fired back at whatever was there, which was about 10 Creations, all rabbits. As Dr Jones fired back, shooting one in the chest and the other through the leg, he realised that the number of these rabbits was becoming miniscule. He wasn't the only one firing at them...

Noticing that all 10 of the rabbits had been hit, he got up and was bout to walk over them, when suddenly he felt a gun on the back of his head...

'Don't move, traitor!' said the Creation rabbit behind him.

Suddenly there was a bang as a gun was fired, going straight through the head of one single rabbit. Dr Jones fell down from the shot. The Creation rabbit continued to stand.............suddenly realised that it had been shot through the head and collapsed into a heap, giving Dr Jones the view of another rabbit behind it, pointing a blaster right at the Creations head....



It was a girl rabbit, looked roughly 18. She wore a sexy silk skirt and a black leather shirt with it. The shirt had a picture of a gold and silver flower sewn into it, which perfectly matched her strands of gold and silver hair. Across her right eye was a small scar, which looked as if she had been hit with a blade or something. The rabbit dropped the gun into a holster and drew out a sword, also carrying a small emerald in her other hand.

'Hi...' she said, 'names Wild Angel...you must be the good old Dr J, right?'

Dr Jones looked at her, stunned, 'Um..yes...thank you...'

'Any time, precious, but you can call me Nobara if you want...'

'Where am I?'

'Small desolate village, just like any other on this planet. How long you been asleep?'

'I don't know...'

'Look,' she said, 'I was sent to find some people, one of them being you...'

'Why me?' Dr Jones asked.

'Were setting up a resistance...no name for it yet...'

'Is Lori with you?'

'Um, 'fraid not...' Nobara then placed her sword back in its pouch and she drew out two uzis, one of which she had used onthe Creation. She checked they were fully loaded and then placed them back in...

'Come with me...' she said as she went over to Dr Jones and put out a hand for him. He took it and got up, blushing slightly.

'Why you gone red, Dr?'

'Um...never been saved by a girl before...'

'Theres always a first time, hun, theres always a first time...'

They went out of the wreckage to a nearby forest, where Nobard made two knocks on a specific tree and was allowed into the secret hideout underneath, along with Dr Jones...
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'With his father dead and his life as confusing as TIME itself, he stood independantly with his blaster and sword by his side. He was going to save the world, no doubt about it...'