The story sounds supiciously like something MC would write, following one supreme unstoppable force pwning the universe. I suggest (just a suggestion) you take away the robot suit, increase the size of the enemy's legions of terror, and add an agonizingly annoying sidekick that just gets in the way.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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