Yay, good feedback.
What's going to be unique about this story is that there's going to be a very important turning point nowhere near the climax. You'll just have to see what that means when I get there. I also may occasionally (especially in times of great suspense) release the next chapter's chapter title. Like now, even though there's no suspense.
http://www.foxmage.com/Chapter3.gif
Oh, and if you were wondering, the first chapter is a sort of flash-forward to something Forrever's writing in the future.
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<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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