*reads it*

OK, this is the first story I have ever read here, so sorry if anything goes wrong with my comments.

I LOVE IT SO FAR! It was a great crossover between something I can see in the game (the warp to the birdland...awww...good old days) and something fictional. I can imagine almost everything in it, though some characters seem to be a bit unknown to me.

I'd definitely love to see more of it ^_^