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Shiverz CC

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Dec 5, 2003, 09:01 AM
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A Couple Of Added Chapters

Yes I havnt been on this forum for awhile i've been else where but anyways I thought i'd show people I'm still here by adding the next chapters.

Chapter 6 – News from Jazz Jackrabbit

“SHIVERZ SHIVERZ “shouted someone from outside. ShIvErZ opened the window from his bedroom and looked out. “Jazz what do you want its 5:30 in the morning” said ShIvErZ. Jazz stared up and showed him a photo. The photo said on the back , To ShIvErZ your stupid little family have been captured by me you will never find them so here is a photo of them in a cage , From Devan. “ShIvErZ by the background in the photo I think they are on a different planet but nobody knows where Devan is hiding at the minute” said Jazz. “We have to go Jazz and find out where he is hiding” said ShIvErZ. Then he ran down the stairs and opened the door to let Jazz in. Jazz came in and sat down and in came Benny and when he saw Jazz he started squeaking and jumped on his knee. “Hiya Benny are you a cute centipede, yes you are” said Jazz. Benny fell asleep on Jazz’s knee and started to make a squeaky snore. “Right I’ve got a funny feeling he’ll be keeping them somewhere that you know about” said Jazz. ShIvErZ thought for a moment then remembered that Nippius was a place he could have taken him with it being ShIvErZ home planet. “Let’s go Jazz, to the Star-Buster-2400” shouted ShIvErZ which make Benny jump in the air with shock. They ran outside to the SB2400 and climbed in but little did they know that Benny had also jumped in. “Eva don’t forget to feed Rabby “shouted Jazz. ShIvErZ started up the SB2400 and they were away towards Nippius. “I hope Benny will be ok , he’ll probably go round to your house Jazz and play with Rabby “ said ShIvErZ. “Yeah little Rabby the centipede they are so cute those little centipedes” said Jazz. The SB2400 shifted into full speed and they were off at light speed flying towards Nippius.

Chapter 7 – Nippius

“Here Jazz take this jacket you’ll freeze on Nippius” said ShIvErZ. Jazz hopped out of the Star Buster and grabbed the jacket and said , “How come you don’t need a jacket like this won’t you freeze”. ShIvErZ stared at him and then pointed at a sign which was blank. Jazz looked up and then the sign played a video message. “Hello visitors and welcome to Nippius the home of all cold rabbits , when you visit you’ll need to take a risk ……… “. As the video babbled on about evil turtles attacking the planet ShIvErZ said , “Here this bit watch this bit”. So as Jazz turned to the sign he listened. “As you know if you do get captured try and alert the planet savers who protect the planets , here is a list of famous names , Jazz Jackrabbit Carrotus , Bob Hopper Dreamdays , Shiverz Coldrabbit Nippius. Jazz turned ShIvErZ and said , “Wow I never knew you … aswell … well ShIvErZ you could of told me I mean you used to save this planet, where were you back in Jazz Jackrabbit 1”. ShIvErZ looked and his face looked weird. “Well I was , you picked a bad time I mean I was on a … date with Anita” said ShIvErZ. Jazz looked and laughed silently and then they walked on. “That still didn’t answer my question though I only asked you why you didn’t need a jacket” said Jazz. “Well because I was brought up on this planet I thought you would have recognized that by now” said ShIvErZ. As they walked on they passed houses and bars and pubs and shops.

Chapter 8 – Mysterious Stalker

Jazz was bored and so was ShIvErZ but they couldn’t stop now. “I know this is boring but I have to find my family look reach into the jacket pocket there should be a MYTV” said ShIvErZ. Jazz looked puzzled “You have a Micro Yoodle Television” he said. ShIvErZ nodded and Jazz turned it on the first channel that they got a good signal from was the news. “Attention all citizens of Nippius there has been word of a strange women rabbit going round who goes by the name of Catz” said the news reporter. ShIvErZ looked at the TV he couldn’t believe it. “I ran into her in Mysterious Forest she seemed really weird like she was stalking me” ShIvErZ said. Jazz looked around then pulled out his gun , then ShIvErZ took out his gun. “I suppose we better be on guard if this weird Catz women is around she probably will be dangerous” said Jazz.

To Be Continued
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