I read it. That makes three readers.
For future reference, the trick to getting readers is a good first paragraph to hook them. People will judge the entire story off the first paragraph, since it's (traditionally) the first one they read. Curiosity helps keep a reader's interest, so the more questions you can have them ask in the first paragraph, the better.
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GENERATION 22: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.
<i>"This picture shows me that the gray bird man is just a bully and picks on smaller birds. Just because he has no friends and takes it out on others smaller than him to look good. I can see in the parrats eyes that it does however have a understanding of the gray bird man and is upset about getting cut."</i> - Speeza on cartoon birds.
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