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Dec 19, 2003, 03:39 PM
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Originally Posted by RSPSS FR
That makes four, unless you are using some strange, new, form of math.
I think the form of math I'm using is called "Judge the readers by who replies to the latest chapter within 1 day." I may need to update my system. =P

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Originally Posted by Radium
For future reference, the trick to getting readers is a good first paragraph to hook them. People will judge the entire story off the first paragraph, since it's (traditionally) the first one they read. Curiosity helps keep a reader's interest, so the more questions you can have them ask in the first paragraph, the better.
I think the first paragraph of my story can instigate quite a few questions:

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Some ideas are good. Some aren’t. Then, there are those where ‘terrible idea’ is an understatement. This idea was one of them.
But that's just me.

I think I overreacted a bit with the rant, but I'll try to atone for it by writing more. I think that it's probably logical that, if you don't have readers, write more!
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