Hmm, here's something. Better than most other criticizes I've seen:

Wow. You're actually gonna pull this off. The quote's very cute and insightful. I didn't expect that, lol. *hides* I like the brushes. Look like water. Amazing composition. I like how you just 'suggest' things, not put them in. And then the clarity of the plane... Very nice.
Ha. THis took less than the heart-bearing samurai.