Oh, I just didn't want a critique, because I didn't really put much into that picture. I know its quite flawed already, and I'm not too interested in fixing it up. I know I can do better, I just didn't give it a good enough effort.

Yes, I know the arms are screwed up and again she is lacking breasts (I was too focused on drawing the clothing stuff and everything, so I didn't put much shape in there accidentally. That and I was trying to draw that jar, and that was in the way of my attention too). Also when drawing baggy shirts and such, I guess I loose the shape somewhere in there. But actually, the shoulders are something I would be interested in a critique about. So I wouldn't mind that.

I'm going to go back and draw again, and this time I'll try to get things right. Put the effort into it that I know my art deserves. I know I have the understanding of these forms, I just have to dig it up.