Fine...
It's a good picture, but a few quips.
Hmm. Sailor venus just looks...off. firstly her thighs are HUGE! They alone are as tall as her entire upper body. Thusly your proportions are off for the entire picture. Her arms don't extened quite long enough. Another point is that her left forearm is a hair shorter than her...bicep part of the arm...yeah. Her hair is done nicly though. I'm sorry to say this, but her left hand is poorly done. I can't tell individual fingers apart, making it look like she has 2 fingers. I'm going to just assume that she is holding spaz's hand and those things below her hand are his fingers. I hope I don't come off too hard on you for that.
The height difference is odd. Spaz is so much shorter than her that in actuallity it would be that venus would be lifting spaz by the hair, which dosen't seem like it'd be that comfortable. Other wise spaz is well drawn. However...gah...he's leaning backward, but he's being lifted off the ground.
Well, it's a good picture none the less. Your drawing is great, but you need to improve on your technical. I'd give you links, but I need to find them first :P. Again sorry if I sound like I'm just beating down on you. Now I'll just have to wait for Radium to come by and counter everything I said.
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