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Radium

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Mar 8, 2004, 04:38 PM
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Cool... Whats my current level?
988. I like a loose EXP curve.

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Originally Posted by Batty Buddy
Well, no matter what I never am sure about human body proportions and stuff like that. It would be a big help if you told me what I'm doing right and wrong in THAT area.
First off, I'd like to say that you seem to have a good understanding of facial proportions. There's a lot of thick outlines on the face image in places like the bridge of the nose and lips. Generally, you can get a much more natural looks by showing at least 50% of the nose and mouth with shading alone.

In the Jade picture, most of her proportions looks good. Her hips appear too thin compared to her torso, and her left arm clashes with the rest of the image. It looks like her left arm was stolen from Mickey Mouse, meaning somewhere, there's a one-armed mouse running around. I'd suggest shortening her forearm and making her left hand closer to her right hand's size. The only other thing is that the far side of her face seems to stick out a bit far. Overall it's a very good image.

Also, I'd usually go linking to some porportional image, but I figure you're old enough that I can just suggest swimsuit calendars *cough*.
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Last edited by Radium; Mar 8, 2004 at 05:23 PM.