How does a random interlude posted due to not being able to do anything with my other characters at the moment sound?

In his chair, bathed in the flickering lights from the video screens filling the wall of his command room, yet somehow still in a deep bubble of shadows and gloom, Rspss Fr broods. Suddenly, he perks up. He turns, spinning the rolling chair he is sitting in, and speaks. "Come." A figure detaches from the shadow where he was hiding, so skillfully one would say he was not there before...