Well, let's get right to it.

Toca looks just fine, nothing I can see. But Eli is a different story. As the routine normall goes, I attempt to go into the same pose that he went into, and man, that hurt my right leg, the one that Eli has all streched out. IMO it'd be a lot more comfortable if he had is knee touching the ground. And now, onto the main point dealing with the sword.

I can't exactly tell which way his hand (the one that is grabbing the handle) is oriented, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt seeing as one of the directions would be impossible ;(. But otherwise in theory, it's fine. But it's just too busy right there. When you look at it, like risp said, it looks like Toca's got it in her mouth.

My time has been cut short.

And Faw, it's art. You're supposed to criticize it so that he'll improve.