Go ahead and forget about that last rule Stratn.
I ment that if you write about something who wants to write and has not been introduced yet you might mess up that persons own chapter, but you should talk about that with the person, go ahead.

Nice chapter Risp, good work and i like the fact that you sort of added a new species. The robot.
And we could do something with the rebbelion on Diamondus later on in the story.