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Tik

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Aug 7, 2004, 07:36 PM
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Hi. As you know I've been trying to make a very short synopsis of characters and events. Here is what I have so far:

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SYNOPSIS OF MAIN CHARACTERS

SLAYO
- Majo (young woman travelling Carrotus trying to reach Diamondus, discovers Louie)
- Louie Greenthorpe (260 year old vampire who abandon's his family's mansion with Majo)
KAZ
- Kaz (killer for hire that went crazy against Carrotus after being betrayed)
RSPSS FR
- Jargon Random (robot assembler escaping Diamondus)
- Robbie (Jargon's robotic assistant)
- John Radin (friend of Jargon, escape Diamondus with him and heads towards Carrotus)
ACID
- Tony Waterback (word-class racing pilot who crash lands on Carrotus)
DUCKY
- Verity (woman on Diamondus during its civil war; 28 year old hacker, bar tender)
DOUBBLE DUTCH
- Tier (zombie turtle under the influence of The Hunger that demands he consume flesh)
TOXIC BUNNY
- Thomas Bradhurst or Tom (rabbit in Greenthorpe negotiating fall of mansion)
- Susan Bradhurst (wife of Tom)
- Gary Parker (distrusting rival of Tom; rich from inheritance)
INFINITE SPAZ
- Alexander Garand (veteran nosferatu-hunter; assigned to rid Greenthorpe mansion of vampire)
KRSPLAT
- Diallo Kalu (19 year old, loves having fun; gets in a fight and is sent to the hospital)
- Jabari McNabb (also 19, shares apt. with Diallo, desires to save lives)
COBRA
- ? (young rabbit girl that escapes from a stoic 'school' that is poisoning for other purposes)
SPAZTIC
- Icarus (male black rabbit, childhood friend of Naomi, involved with Diamondus war)
- Naomi (female golden rabbit, agrees to abandon her situation for Icarus when he finds her)
COPPERTOP
- Jesse Aimon (male 17 lanky, white fur, house burned for war involvement, only survivor)
UNKNOWN RABBIT
- ShaH-li Felenzo Orbonzen (female cat with fighting instincts and a lost memory)
- Andrew Ricardin (meets ShaH-li and wants her to help him market Dreempipes liquid)
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SYNOPSIS OF EVENTS

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Chapter 1: Louie Greenthorpe (Slayo)
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Markie Evans and Billy Thatcher are dared to enter the long-abandoned mansion of the Greenthorpe family that founded the town of Greenthorpe in which they all abide. Inside they discover a large, purple rabbit, presumably the ghost of Louie Greenthorpe.

Scared, they and their friends run far away and run into Majo, a woman who was born in Orangelia and has travelled much of Carrotus. She is travelling to Oakloma where she will try and go to Diamondus. She learns of the ghost and leaves to find the mansion. She meets Louie there, who has not spoken to a person in 240 years.

When Louie was young he was attacked by a gray-furred rabbit that bit his neck, causing him to eventually die and become a vampire. His parents soon after died of grief. Louie rose from his grave and lived in the mansion, living on whatever living creatures came his way. Majo soon discovers he is a vampire of Louie's own volition.

Theodore Thatcher, Billy's father, discovers the kids and that Majo went to the mansion. He travels over there and finds Louie nursing Majo who has passed out, but he thinks he is trying to feed on Majo. They fight, and Theodore dies. Louie tastes his blood, then hides the body. Majo awakens and they leave the mansion together.

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Chapter 2: Divine Bloody Retribution (Kaz)
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Four rabbits are given a mission to steal from a safe belonging to the Carrotus army.

Kaz is the distraction during the heist, James (large brown-furred rabbit) deals with anyone who discovers the heist is taking place, Eleanor (medium built white-furred rabbit, long blonde hair) the one that actually steals from the safe, and Boz (weak, dark green rabbit) is the technician.

Everything seems to be going well until Kaz is discovered by a mistake he makes. He crashes and wakes up to find out that he had been used as bait. They were going to kill him for his share of the reward, but he kills James, Boz and Eleanor. Kaz turns on Carrotus and kills everyone in the entire fuel supply they'd been stealing from. He begins, then, to go on a killing spree.

He buys a ship, and realizing he is running out of money, becomes a killer for hire.

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Chapter 3: The Mad Technomancer (RSPSS FR)
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In a city on Diamondus lives Jargon Random, an obsessive creator and assembler of robots. One morning after having spent many late nights working on a robot (assisted by his robotic assistant R-0B/y aka Robbie), he is awakened by his friend John Radin.

John informs Jargon that the city is being invaded and they need to escape. John abandons his apartment and together they leave for Carrotus until the conflict blows over.

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Chapter 4: -- (Acid)
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Tony Waterback (a grey-furred jackrabbit from Technoir) is a highly esteemed racing pilot who also invented a ship. He was racing around the Sluggion asteroid belt when one of the planet's old defense systems opened fire on him. This signalled some defense ships to begin chasing Tony around the solar system.

Eventually they reach Carrotus where a ship manages to blow off Tony's left wing, causing him to plummet towards Carrotus. He manages to land, but his ship is nearly ruined. Far off he spots a building and ventures towards it for help.

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Chapter 5: -- (Ducky)
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Takes place in Diamondus, two years into the nasty civil war. Verity (dark auburn, waist-length hair, black tipped ears, pale green eyes, grey furred rabbit) is found returning to her apartment alone. She is a 28 year old hacker who stayed despite the war. She then goes to a pub where she finds Eddie, a dusty-red coloured rabbit, who works with her in hacking. There she tends the bar and customers.

She finds a stranger in the bar, cloaked and hooded, with a tiger-striped tale. She does not trust him or the way he acts and does not feel safe despite her surroundings. She resolves to continue for her cause, despite her sincere wishes.

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Chapter 6: -- (Doubble Dutch)
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Tier, a turtle, is under the constant mastery of The Hunger to consume life because he is a zombie. He feasts on flesh to prevent his own from decay. He discovers a blue rabbit and attempts to attack it. However, something happens that disrupts Tier from his prey..

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Chapter 7: -- (Toxic Bunny)
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Back in Greenthorpe is Thomas Bradhurst (or Tom; slightly short, orange rabbit, single lop ear, glasses, blue eyes, grey suit), who gets a letter proposing a new factory where the old Greenthorpe mansion lied. It would help bring Greenthorpe out of monetary doldrums. He becomes very excited about the prospects and leaves his wife, Susan, to stand in his place as he travels to Orleton to see Ranford Smith about buying the estate. Also at Tom's office is Gary Parker, a workplace rival who got rich from an inheritance.

It is revealed that Tom faked a diploma in the study of vampires to appease his Uncle Martin and his father. It is also revealed that rumours of a vampire have been long circulating Greenthorpe. Tom discovers that he can get the estate if proof that there is no heir to the Greenthorpe estate is found. On his way out, Ranford tells Jack Cholmondely to "take care" of Tom so that they do not lose the profitable estate.

On his way back from Orleton, Tom is ambushed by three red rabbits. He manages to escape and race into the forest. Sprinting away, he trips on a root in a path he finds, and then feels a sharp pain in his head before passing out.

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Chapter 8: -- (Infinite Spaz)
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Alexander Garand (large rabbit, blonde hair, glasses) is a denizen who deals with the nosferatu in Hopteego. They send creatures such as werewolves, vampires, etc to eternal ****ation. Alex is a manager of the people who are actually out on the front lines, dealing with the creatures. This particular day he gets a message that he is being transferred from management back to the front lines as a vampire hunter.

He receives information that his mission is the Greenthorpe mansion. He watches a videotape of internet footage where some ventured inside the mansion where a vampire caused a massacre. He begins to head towards Greenthorpe, and in a woods nearby during the night is surrounded by wolves. He manages to escape and begins running for his life before falling...