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Originally Posted by Ninjajazz
story goes next: Jazz and Spaz are again captured by Devan, and Jazz and Spazz has to escape. They escape and then they go to outside of castle, there is beach, cause the forstress is in middle of sea. They must capture boat and then cross the ocean. Then the story goes very slowly and interesting.
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Might I suggest a little originality? If you can't write stories, find someone who can. (When have Jazz and Spaz ever been captured by Devan?)
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