That was quite interesting. Devan always seemed to be a bit of a one-dimensional villain, but you've given him motivation, a history, and all that other good stuff that makes a character who they are. I especially liked how you managed to fit episodes A, B, C and Holiday Hare into the storyline. Myself, I always thought A, B and C occured somewhere between "Gene Machine" and "The Chase is on", and the Holiday Hares simply not existing, but your way makes much more sense. Good job.
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