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Monolith

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Monolith is doing well so far

Sep 3, 2004, 03:34 PM
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- Eva could've been done better, especially her eyes (which just look strange and awkward).
Her eyes might look awkward because I realize I forgot to give her eyebrows or eyelashes. Her head might also be a little too tall, but I'm not so sure about that.

- Chuck could've been done a bit better as well (looks a bit emotionless).
Chuck was rather difficult to draw because I didn't have any references for him other than his standing sprite in game.

- Jazz also looks a bit dazed/lost in thought there ;p.
I did have trouble trying to figure out just how Jazz's expression should be, and what I ended up with isn't too great. I'm not sure how to make it better though.

- The problem with Chuck's eyes is that they aren't focused on anything. It makes him look hypnotized or something.
Chuck is supposed to be looking off too the side somewhere.

- Oh, and Lori's neck connects strangely.
Lori's neck looks properly connected to me..

- The lack of eyebows on centrain characters makes their expression look quite stupid.
I now notice that Eva lacks eyebrows when she should have them. Otherwise, I don't think Jazz, Spaz, or Chuck are supposed to have eyebrows.


Also I should note that my primay source for references was the JJ2 manual (and LC for Lori).
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