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Hey, not a bad picture. The shading style seems to be basic gradients, but it works very well, especially on the pants. My main problem is that a few areas should have had a little more work put into them...
Lori's front hair. It looks two dimensional. Actually, the whole top-of-her-head area is really confusing, and I can't figure out what parts are her head, which her hair, and which her ears. My current guess is that one of the ears is really big. I'm not sure. Needs a lot more distinction and 3dism.
Lori's hands. Those do not look like fingers at all. They look like a roundish object with a few black lines drawn on it. Again, too flat.
Lori's right foot (our left) is also confusing. It just seems to cut off at the bottom, instead of being rounded like the other.
Final nitpick are the breasts, which do not suffer from being flat at all. The one on the left (our right) is fine, though it may be a little big for Lori - artist's interperetation, I guess. The other one, unfortunately, looks more like a picture of a fish, painted purple and yellow. It's shaped and sized differently from the round one. I suspect you may have been trying to place emphasis on Lori's more feminine attributes - the butt is a little big, by the way - which may not be the best idea for a rabbit who dresses in exercise gear, jumps around a lot and does karate kicks with great regularity. Would this body be very useful for that?
Anyway, this isn't bad, but there were a few things which jumped out at me. Keep up the good work, and consider submitting it to Lori Central... far too much Lori art is posted here but not submitted.
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