Interesting to see an illustrated story, even if you did just take the images from I-have-no-idea-where. Nice idea.

As for the story itself... well, obviously, the grammar isn't perfect, but you can't do anything about that. I'm more concerned with the sudden appearance of this "rabbit lady". Suspension of disbelief amongst your audience will only last so long before this rabbit lady stops feeling like a character and starts feelling like a plot device. If at all possible, give her an appearance, a name, and (hopefully) a backstory and/or weakness.
Also, keep in mind that many of us have never watched Pokemon, and don't plan to. The words "Team Magma" appears at one point in the story, with no explanation. Are we supposed to associate this with something? Explain it better. You've already put some work into explaining things, like descriptions of this "blaze" thing, but others are woefully unexplained - he used "blaze kick"?
One more suggestion. Use the enter key. Your story would be all in one paragraph were it not for the little monster pictures. An easy way of breaking up paragraphs is just to put an enter after each time someone talks. This makes everything much easier to read.