You are sir.
And Cobs, that chapter was amazing, you introduced the characters in an amazing way. Erditine was only a small part of this chapter but i couldn't help feeling sorry for her when she passed away. And i could not have introduced the 'character' better myself. Thank you.

I will start on mine now. (The beginning is a flashback, explaining more about the character you introduced in the end, so i don't have to wait for anyone.)