I guess I should reply. I was going to do that originally, but then I thought of the stories I wrote in my childhood and decided not to make the same mistake.
Browse through my story and look at all the dialogue. If I were to add an adverb to each sentence of that dialogue (like monotonously, excitedly, annoyingly) etc, or even did things like questioned, replied, even said, you would get sick of me repeating the same words.
In the novels I read, dialogue appears the same way (or similar) as in this story. And this is why.
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