Original title!

Well, the deadline of Baggers' contest is drawing near, so I've got to start training to draw those guys.
Also, I'm planning to draw a couple of comics of them in the not-so-very-distant future...
So, here's a little scribble of the two I quickly scribbled in some more than half an hour.

I'm asking for your input on the way I drew them, since the style is not exactly the same as the original one. Tell me about anything you like and don't like and anything I forgot or didn't get right ( *points at Jazz' backpack* ).
kthxbai