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Good start, but some suggestions:
-Make movement grid based. WR is right about positioning yourself between walls.
-Make the characters less flat. Can you draw them in front of the wall behind them, like the thingies you pick up are?
-Make the camera angles a bit less annoying. The movement is usually done well, but sometimes you can't see where you're going.
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