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I second Ninjajazz.
Raddy criticism time! As always, assume I like anything I don't mention.
On the first one, when he falls down, the angle his head is seen at doesn't change. You should have his head from a top (or at least slightly more tilted forward) view like when he's bowing. His neck looks like it's breaking while he's falling as-is.
Also, the 3D model is way too thin (from a side view, that is). I'd suggest making his eyes and body rounder.
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