The wings on the Faerie are just flat, not special or anything. They're not detailed. The pictures the others posted are good examples for detail. The bodies of the others are waaaaaaaaaaay to thin, the feet are too small and you don't shade. It looks just flat. The hair is also way to big, and don't dare blame it on style because style should atleast be somewhat anatomically correct. If you had hair like that it would probably rip your head off. The arms are too small and too thin. The shading on the third pic is well... bad, it is too dark and too fat. You should zoom in and do it carefully. Determine a light source. The shoulders are WAAAAAY to... well, Ki doesn't even have shoulders...
http://www.howarddavidjohnson.com/light_source-1.jpg
http://www.howarddavidjohnson.com/light_source-2.jpg
Oh, and it is dumb of you to not accept crits because someone said he took a quick ref from Sonic Shuffle -.-. If you continue doing that, you will never get better. Don't defend yourself with "My faerie should be like that stupid loser!!!" but try and improve your flat wings on the pictures and get some detail in it.
Links to other faerie pics:
http://www.sjgames.com/wallpaper/img/faerie-1024.jpg
http://www.jalekro.nl/produkten/faer...ets/elfjes.htm
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But think of the aerodynamics!
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... I quoted thee. :P
Edit: Okay, I removed the url thingie too. Here some more wing pics, they are a bit big though:
http://www.unitedmaskandparty.com/Ha...airy_wings.jpg
http://www.bumpinthenightproductions...4/flywings.jpg
http://www.costumesinc.com/Costumes/.../60240-std.jpg
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Last edited by Arti; Jun 20, 2005 at 08:11 AM.
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